I will provide industry script coverage and professional screenwriting notes

United States

I speak English

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Industry Script Reader and Comedy Writer

Professional Screenwriter, Comedy Writer, Song Writer, and Script Reader with 16 years of creative experience. I have written for The Onion, collaborated with The Second City, managed operations at Za...

About this Gig

Looking for the insider gatekeeper feedback your script needs to survive the competition gauntlet? As a professional screenplay reader and coverage analyst for elite international competitions like BlueCat, ScriptMatix (before they transitioned to AI), and the Chicago Screenplay Awards, I have evaluated hundreds of scripts against rigorous agency and festival standards. I am also an active writer for The Onion, a former collaborator with The Second City, and a live entertainment director and manager. As a manager at Zanies Comedy Club, I've worked with countless comedians, performers, writers, talent agents and managers, which has also taught me exactly what catches an executives eye.

I will provide a thorough, candid, and constructive analysis of your TV pilot, feature screenplay, or short film script, including:

Logline & Premise: Is your hook commercially viable and clear?
Pacing & Structure: Actionable breakdown of your narrative arcs and scene progression.
Character Development: Analysis of character motivations, depth, and distinct dialogue voices.
Production & Marketability Notes: Concrete feedback on how to make yo budget-friendly or ready for representation.