I will be your book editor for literary agent submission and query readiness

United States

I speak English

73 orders completed

I diagnose revise and restore your manuscript

Professional book editor and proofreader for fiction and nonfiction. I improve clarity, structure, flow, and consistency. Services: developmental feedback, line editing, copyediting, and proofreading ...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

Highly Responsive

Known for exceptionally quick replies

About this Gig

Before you submit to agents, your manuscript needs to be ready, not just written.


I help authors prepare their work for submission to literary agents by identifying weak points, tightening the structure, and improving clarity where it matters most.

This is not basic proofreading.


This is focused editing for query success and first-page impact.


What I focus on:

  • Opening chapters (hook, pacing, clarity)
  • Story structure and flow
  • Character strength and consistency
  • Clarity, tone, and readability
  • Line-level improvements where needed


Submission materials support:

  • Query letter editing
  • Synopsis review and refinement
  • Positioning feedback (what agents will notice first)


What you get:

  • Edited manuscript (or sample chapters)
  • Clear, actionable feedback
  • Notes on what may affect agent decisions
  • Suggestions to strengthen your submission


Best for:

  • Authors preparing to query agents
  • Fiction and nonfiction manuscripts
  • Writers who want serious, honest feedback


Agents decide fast. Your manuscript needs to hold attention from page one.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Memoir/ biography

Language:

English

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