I will be your suspense or fiction beta reader and critique with inline comments

5.0
5.0

Pakistan

I speak Urdu, English, French

189 orders completed

Gig Summary

'Turning ideas, manuscripts, and stories into polished books'

Book Editor | Fiction Beta Reader | Ghostwriter With 15+ years of reading, analyzing, and reviewing stories, I've developed a keen eye for transforming manuscripts into publication-ready books. Backe...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

Highly Responsive

Known for exceptionally quick replies

What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

Hi, I'm Maria..


As an English Grammar Expert, literature reviewer, and enthusiastic reader, I am skilled in providing a detailed and natural feedback along with inline comments. I also provide with alternative dialogue suggestions that are often LOVED by clients!


I don't believe in offering surface-level or generic feedback. Instead, I provide comprehensive inline comments and chapter-level notes that capture my genuine emotional reactions, thoughts, and observations as I experience your story page by page.


Why choose me?


  • In-depth analysis of your final draft.
  • Targeted inline and chapter by chapter commentary.
  • Suggestions for beginning, twists, endings, and hooks.
  • Flagging errors in grammar and flow.
  • Video consultation available before placing your order to ensure authenticity and discuss your project with confidence.



Emotional, character-driven stories captivate me the most!


Prices can be adjustable according to your affordability if we are collaborating for the first time!


Click on 'Order Now' or 'message' for further discussion!

Genre:

Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

Language:

English

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Urdu

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Reviews

93 reviews for this Gig
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    mikaeladodson

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    All good and appreciate Mariya's help in helping craft my novel. We are working through it in chunks, and seems to be working well. My first novel, so a learning experience to be sure. Here are some more words! LOL!

    $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    pdm2000

    CA

    Canada

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This is the second time I've used Mariya's excellent services. She included a very useful analysis of my story, including overall impressions of what worked and what needed to be improved. Also included were inciteful and thorough inline comments which were extremely detailed and very specific. These...

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

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  • S

    sadie_marlowe

    US

    United States

    5

    Mariya read closely and told me the truth. She answered every question with specifics, flagged two gaps I had missed, and added seven clear suggestions with reasons. Delivered a day early. I will be sending her the next book.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

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    Yes
    No
  • C
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    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Thank you, Maria, for always going above and beyond to provide me with such insightful and enlightening feedback!

    $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V

    vaw413

    US

    United States

    5

    Enjoyed working with this seller from professional and timely

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

93 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(93)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M
    image-docs

    mikaeladodson

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    All good and appreciate Mariya's help in helping craft my novel. We are working through it in chunks, and seems to be working well. My first novel, so a learning experience to be sure. Here are some more words! LOL!

    $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    pdm2000

    CA

    Canada

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This is the second time I've used Mariya's excellent services. She included a very useful analysis of my story, including overall impressions of what worked and what needed to be improved. Also included were inciteful and thorough inline comments which were extremely detailed and very specific. These...

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sadie_marlowe

    US

    United States

    5

    Mariya read closely and told me the truth. She answered every question with specifics, flagged two gaps I had missed, and added seven clear suggestions with reasons. Delivered a day early. I will be sending her the next book.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Thank you, Maria, for always going above and beyond to provide me with such insightful and enlightening feedback!

    $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V

    vaw413

    US

    United States

    5

    Enjoyed working with this seller from professional and timely

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No