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I will be your suspense or fiction beta reader and critique with inline comments
Gig Summary
'Turning ideas, manuscripts, and stories into polished books'
Book Editor | Fiction Beta Reader | Ghostwriter
With 15+ years of reading, analyzing, and reviewing stories, I've developed a keen eye for transforming manuscripts into publication-ready books. Backe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
linc_powers
United States
Mariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript...
mizzy5
United Kingdom
Excellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her...
artghose
United States
She does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
kelseyabreu
United States
Maroya has been an awesome beta reader! she's very informative in her revieas and tells you all od the pros and cons.She has earned me as a repeat customer
About this Gig
Hi, I'm Maria,
As an English Grammar Expert, literature reviewer, and enthusiastic reader, I am skilled in reviewing stories with a sharp eye for detail.
Beta reading styles vary, but mine is all about the deep dive. I provide comprehensive inline feedback and chapter-level notes to help you master your story's pacing and flow.
Why choose me?
- High-level feedback on your story's skeleton.
- In-depth analysis of your final draft.
- Targeted inline and chapter by chapter commentary .
- Suggestions for beginning, twists, endings, and hooks.
- Flagging errors in grammar and flow..
Whether its romance, thriller, emotional, psychological suspense, crime, investigation, noir, children's book or mystery, I'll give you honest, thoughtful, and professional feedback as these are my most favourite genres!
literary fiction, emotional and character driven stories are my favourite!
And to gain your trust, I also offer a free 2-page sample beta read so you can see my approach before committing.
Click on 'Order Now' or 'message' for further discussion!
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Language:
English
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Urdu
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What makes your beta reading service unique?
I provide in-depth, personalized feedback with a reader's perspective and a writer's insight. Whether it’s fantasy, young adult, or nonfiction, I focus on clarity, coherence, and engagement to help elevate your manuscript.
Do you specialize in specific genres for beta reading?
Yes! I specialize in romance, fantasy, thrillers, and general fiction. However, I’m open to reading across genres and will always provide honest, tailored manuscript critique regardless of the theme.
What kind of feedback do you provide?
offer detailed, constructive feedback including what’s working well and where improvements can be made—be it plot consistency, dialogue, pacing, character arcs, or world-building.
How do I know if your beta reading style suits my project?
Before we start, I offer a sample beta read (on request) of a few pages to show you how I work. This helps ensure we’re a good fit and you know exactly what kind of feedback to expect.
Do you offer revisions or follow-up questions after the beta read?
Yes! I’m happy to clarify feedback or discuss ideas after you’ve reviewed my notes. I want to support you through your revision process.
Do you keep my manuscript confidential?
Yes, confidentiality is a top priority. Your manuscript will never be shared or discussed with anyone else without your permission.
What’s the difference between alpha and beta reading?
Alpha reading focuses on early-stage feedback—big-picture issues like plot holes, pacing, and structure. Beta reading happens later and reflects a reader’s reaction to the story. I combine both to give you comprehensive insights that improve your manuscript from start to finish.
Can I send a longer manuscript than the listed word counts?
Absolutely! If your manuscript exceeds the word limit, just message me. I’ll create a custom offer for you based on the length and level of feedback required.
Reviews
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L linc_powers
Repeat Client
United States
Mariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript to make it a better book based on her feedback. She let me know the improvements, word count, dialogue and the story and character development had...
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?M mizzy5
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Excellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?C c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her thorough responses to my questions were well done. Definitely looking forward to working with her again. Thank you!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?A artghose
Repeat Client
United States
She does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?K kelseyabreu
United States
Maroya has been an awesome beta reader! she's very informative in her revieas and tells you all od the pros and cons.She has earned me as a repeat customer
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
82 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
L linc_powers
Repeat Client
United States
Mariya is a delight to work with. This is our second collaboration on this manuscript and a re-read for her as I made significant changes on the manuscript to make it a better book based on her feedback. She let me know the improvements, word count, dialogue and the story and character development had...
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?M mizzy5
Repeat Client
United Kingdom
Excellent help as always. Mariya not only pointed out plot holes, she would write example fixes for some parts, going as far as writing paragraphs. Thanks :)
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?C c_rollin_cutts
United States
A fantastic and thoughtful review from Mariya. The inline comments were just what I needed to help move the story along, make any necessary revisions, and her thorough responses to my questions were well done. Definitely looking forward to working with her again. Thank you!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?A artghose
Repeat Client
United States
She does excellent work, with detailed in-line comments. She doesn't use AI to read the book and produce a report, which has become common on this platform. I am a repeat buyer, and I enthusiastically recommend her!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?K kelseyabreu
United States
Maroya has been an awesome beta reader! she's very informative in her revieas and tells you all od the pros and cons.She has earned me as a repeat customer
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
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