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I will developmentally edit ya, epic fantasy novel with detailed feedback
Helping Authors Polish, Perfect, and Publish Their Stories with Expertise
Hello, welcome to my page. I'm Mark Smith, a professional book reader and editor. I work with authors across romance, memoir, sci-fi, and other genres. I carefully beta read manuscripts to understand ...
About this Gig
WELCOME TO MY GIG
Writing YA or epic fantasy can feel overwhelming. You are building worlds, creating believable characters, balancing magic systems, and keeping readers emotionally invested from beginning to end. Sometimes it becomes hard to tell what is working and what needs improvement.
I'm Mark Smith, a graduate with over three years of professional editing experience. I specialize in YA and epic fantasy novels, helping writers improve their stories while preserving their originality.
WHAT I OFFER
Plot and structure analysis
Character arc evaluation to ensure your characters grow in believable and meaningful ways
Inline comments throughout your manuscript
A detailed editorial letter summarizing the strengths of your story and areas that need improvement
WHY WORK WITH ME
I do more than point out problems. I explain why something is not working and provide practical suggestions to help you improve it. Every piece of feedback is tailored specifically to your story.
Whether your manuscript is a rough first draft or nearly ready for publication, I will help you strengthen it and bring your vision to life.
MESSAGE OR ORDER ME TO GET STARTED.
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FAQ
How long does delivery take?
Delivery time depends on the length and complexity of your document. Check the package details or message me for a custom timeline.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
Absolutely. Everything you share with me stays between us. Your story, your ideas, and your manuscript are completely safe.
My manuscript is a rough first draft. Is it too early for developmental editing?
Not at all. In fact, developmental editing at the first draft stage can save you months of going in the wrong direction. I'll help you identify what's working, what needs rethinking, and give you a clear path forward
What exactly will I receive when the editing is done?What exactly will I receive when the editing is done?
You'll get two things: inline comments directly inside your manuscript pointing out specific moments that need attention, and a detailed editorial letter that covers the big picture issues like plot structure, pacing, character arcs, and words.
