I will beta read your romance book and provide honest feedback
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Are you wondering whether you nailed the story trope or the romance? Then you've come to the right person.
I have been reading romance novels since my tween days when I joyfully stumbled upon the Male/Female genre and then later got into the Male/Male genre. So I know all the elements that make these romance novels enjoyable and marketable.
I'll provide constructive advice on your book to help you to polish it and offer your readers a great story.
Story elements I'll address:
- Character development - Analyze whether the characters are complex and appealing.
- Plot - Find any plot holes in the story (if there are any).
- Dialogue - Check if it sounds natural and is engaging.
- Romance - Let you know if it's heartwarming.
- Conflict - Inform you if it's strong enough and believable.
- Pacing - Tell you if the story moves at an appropriate pace.
- Writing style - Point out whether you did 'show' the scenes without using too much description.
Expect in-line comments on the manuscript and a summary detailing what you should work on in the reader's report.
Please, feel free to contact me before ordering this gig if you have any questions or want specific feedback.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you beta read books longer than 100,000 words?
Sure! Contact me with your book length, and I will create a suitable custom offer.
Are you okay with erotic romance?
Yes, I'm cool with explicit, spicy, or smut sex scenes in romance novels.
What stories are a no-no for you?
I’m sure many enjoy these books (to each their own), but BDSM/domination novels with MCs calling each other Daddy, Little Girl, or Boy from the beginning to the end aren’t for me. If it’s just one or two roleplaying sex scenes, then I’ll read it.
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M mawking

United Kingdom
“Working with Martha was such a positive experience. She was professional, thoughtful, and provided feedback in a way that felt clear and easy for me to understand. This made the revision process significantly less overwhelming. You can tell she genuinely cares about helping writers improve their work....
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L lucyaliceauthor

United Kingdom
This was really good feedback, valuable and useful. It was detailed and pointed out some clear issues that I didn't see at first because these characters have loved in my head for years. I am pleased and will use again. Thanks you!
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford

Canada
Quick turnaround, high quality comments provided that helped me with my writing. Would recommend.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you very much for all your work on this draft!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018
Repeat Client

United States
I love working with Martha! She's not only a professional alpha/beta reader, but she's an avid reader. It shines through in her feedback and suggestions. She was one of the first I thought to work with again on a trilogy bc of her meticulous attention to detail. Once again, a stellar delivery for which I'm sincerely grateful. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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M mawking

United Kingdom
“Working with Martha was such a positive experience. She was professional, thoughtful, and provided feedback in a way that felt clear and easy for me to understand. This made the revision process significantly less overwhelming. You can tell she genuinely cares about helping writers improve their work....
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?L lucyaliceauthor

United Kingdom
This was really good feedback, valuable and useful. It was detailed and pointed out some clear issues that I didn't see at first because these characters have loved in my head for years. I am pleased and will use again. Thanks you!
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford

Canada
Quick turnaround, high quality comments provided that helped me with my writing. Would recommend.
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018
Repeat Client

United States
Thank you very much for all your work on this draft!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nw2018
Repeat Client

United States
I love working with Martha! She's not only a professional alpha/beta reader, but she's an avid reader. It shines through in her feedback and suggestions. She was one of the first I thought to work with again on a trilogy bc of her meticulous attention to detail. Once again, a stellar delivery for which I'm sincerely grateful. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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