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I will beta read your ya fantasy, wlw, MLM sapphic romance manuscript
I will provide detailed beta reading, alpha reading, critiques, and constructive
Hello! My name is Mary, and I am passionate about helping writers improve their work through thoughtful and constructive feedback. I provide beta reading, alpha reading, critiques, and detailed feedba...
About this Gig
Hello, a great manuscript deserves more than a simple read; it deserves an honest, professional reader's perspective. If you want to know how your story feels to a real reader before publishing, I'm here to help.
I will beta read your YA fantasy, WLW, MLM, or sapphic romance manuscript and provide thoughtful, constructive feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, worldbuilding, emotional impact, consistency, and overall reader experience.
I'll point out what works, where the story may lose momentum, and which areas could benefit from further development. My feedback is designed to give you clear, practical insights while respecting your unique voice and creative vision.
Whether you're preparing a final draft or still refining your manuscript, you'll receive genuine feedback to help you make confident revisions. Send me your manuscript or message me today and let's make your story stronger and more engaging.
Genre:
Romance
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What exactly will I receive from you?
You get chapter-by-chapter inline reader reactions plus a detailed summary report covering characters, romance chemistry, pacing, plot holes, worldbuilding clarity, ending satisfaction, and authentic sapphic/WLW/MLM representation feedback.
Which genres do you accept?
I specialize in sapphic romance, WLW romance, YA fantasy, romantasy, and LGBTQ+ fiction. Please message me first if your story falls outside these genres.
Can you beta read a series or multiple books?
Yes. I can beta read book series, sequels, and multiple manuscripts. Contact me for a custom offer
What if my manuscript is longer than your package limit
No problem! Send me the word count, and I'll create a custom offer that fits your manuscript.
Do you read MLM stories too?
Absolutely! I happily read MLM stories alongside sapphic and WLW romance. I focus on authentic representation for all LGBTQ+ narratives.
Do you use AI tools to generate feedback?
Never. Every word is read personally by me, and all feedback is written 100% by hand. No AI, no generic responses just genuine human reactions.
What file formats do you accept?
I work with Word (.docx), PDF, Google Docs, and plain text files. Please ensure your manuscript is clearly formatted with chapter breaks.
What if my word count falls between packages?
Message me first! I’ll create a custom offer that matches your exact word count fairly no surprises or overcharging.
Do you offer discounts for series or repeat work?
Yes! If you love my work and return for book 2, 3, or beyond, I offer special repeat-client pricing. Authors who write series are my absolute favorites to work with.
