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Matthew B is unavailable until Jun 7, 2026
“Away for a holiday between these dates! I will be back soon enough, refreshed and ready to continue! Thank you.”
I will beta read and critique your fiction writing with constructive feedback
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About this Gig
Are you searching for thorough feedback on your story? Uncertain about how well your writing presents your ideas, or if your characters are gripping and believable? That is where my experienced beta reading assistance will aid you in improving your manuscript by using optimistic feedback and moderate sincerity to preserve your distinctive writer's voice!
Whether it is a short story or an epic spanning hundreds of pages, I am always ready to provide a thorough, productive critique. My feedback includes an analysis of:
- The Opening Scene
- Characterization & Motivation
- Plot & Conflict
- Pacing
- Setting & Worldbuilding
- Dialogue
- Craft
- Structure
- Voice
- Reader engagement
- And anything else I find that may help you polish your work until it shines!
I aim for constructive criticism and will help to point out:
- Inconsistencies
- Plot holes
- And other manuscript issues that may have been missed.
When providing a thorough, constructive critique, I will provide comments on your manuscript using Track Changes (Microsoft Word) and alongside that, I will also provide a separate, detailed beta report!
Added warning: this is not a proofreading or copy-editing gig! I will point out errors, though!
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
Though my focus is fantasy novels, I am adaptable and read nearly all genres of fiction.
Is there a limit to how long my book can be?
Nope! Just please message me beforehand so I can work out an adapted quote for your specific manuscript's word count.
What if I only want you to read a part of my story?
That is absolutely fine and I am happy to do so for whatever you would like to share!
Does your service include proofreading?
No, but I will point out any as I go along. I either do or will have gigs specifically designed and prepared for proofreading, editing, etc, either now or in the future!
Do you offer ghostwriting?
I do, yes! But I have a separate, specific gig for that!
Will you fix my plot holes/errors?
No, as this service is focused on pointing them out, noting them, or even discussing them in case I have misinterpreted a key point in your manuscript. This service is to help equip you with the advice to conduct your own edits.
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brianinthefog
United Kingdom
Matthew what can I say, I am so impressed with the work you have done and the feedback I had asked for on the book. Your feedback style is exactly what i was looking for to improve my work. I will be implementing your feedback and tidying up the story and text without hesitation and look forward to working with you again soon. Excellent work!!!
$100-$200
Price
8 weeks
Duration
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nada_philippe
Egypt
Working with Matthew was a great experience. He understood exactly what I needed and delivered it. He gave thoughtful, honest feedback and inline comments that made me see how the reader would see the characters. I highly recommend working with him; his insights are genuine and not AI.
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
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Helpful?O oskar789
United States
Matthew was absolutely amazing to work with. 11/10!
Up to $50
Price
3 months
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?P praius
United Kingdom
Though Matthew had a longer default gig length than other beta readers, the depth of his in-line comments and story analysis were worth the wait. He picked up themes and story directions that others missed and provided useful feedback for further revision. Highly recommended.
$200-$400
Price
9 weeks
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?V v_viridian
United States
I asked Matt to give me broad reactions to an audiodrama podcast. He exceeded the scope of work significantly, and in that sense "went the extra mile." However, Matt's writing is extremely poor, and that's essentially all you needed to now. He should not be critiquing anyone's writing. His reactions...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
21 reviews for this Gig
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B brianinthefog
United Kingdom
Matthew what can I say, I am so impressed with the work you have done and the feedback I had asked for on the book. Your feedback style is exactly what i was looking for to improve my work. I will be implementing your feedback and tidying up the story and text without hesitation and look forward to working with you again soon. Excellent work!!!
$100-$200
Price
8 weeks
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?N nada_philippe
Egypt
Working with Matthew was a great experience. He understood exactly what I needed and delivered it. He gave thoughtful, honest feedback and inline comments that made me see how the reader would see the characters. I highly recommend working with him; his insights are genuine and not AI.
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?O oskar789
United States
Matthew was absolutely amazing to work with. 11/10!
Up to $50
Price
3 months
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?P praius
United Kingdom
Though Matthew had a longer default gig length than other beta readers, the depth of his in-line comments and story analysis were worth the wait. He picked up themes and story directions that others missed and provided useful feedback for further revision. Highly recommended.
$200-$400
Price
9 weeks
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?V v_viridian
United States
I asked Matt to give me broad reactions to an audiodrama podcast. He exceeded the scope of work significantly, and in that sense "went the extra mile." However, Matt's writing is extremely poor, and that's essentially all you needed to now. He should not be critiquing anyone's writing. His reactions...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?
