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I will review your vsl and find the line killing your sales
Forensic VSL Diagnosis and Conversion Leak Detection
Most sales copy and VSL scripts don’t fail because of the words. They fail because one sentence quietly kills urgency.
Most writers try to fix this with better phrasing. That’s painting over damage.
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About this Gig
Forensic VSL Audit and Structural Copy Review to Fix Conversions
If you are spending money on traffic, your VSL cannot simply sound good. It must hold pressure from lead to offer. Most scripts fail when structural leaks weaken urgency and give prospects a way out.
I do not provide polishing or proofreading. I provide a forensic diagnosis of your sales argument.
I identify the exact lines where pressure breaks and decision momentum fades.
THE AUDIT PROCESS:
- The Pressure Arc: Mapping where tension builds and where it breaks
- The STOP: Locating the pressure peak of your lead
- Mechanism: Verification Testing whether your unique mechanism actually lands
PACKAGE OUTPUT:
- Basic: Loom diagnosis only
- Standard: Loom + written Kill List (priority removals)
- Premium: Loom + full written failure report and map
WHO THIS IS FOR:
Offer owners, funnel builders, and serious marketers who need structural clarity on why their VSL is underperforming.
IMPORTANT:
This is a diagnostic service. No rewrites. No scripts. No creative edits. My "proofreading" is entirely structural. I audit the psychological pressure and logic of your script. I do not fix grammar or punctuation.
Language:
English
Content type:
Website content
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Genre:
Business management
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Marketing
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Psychology
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Q: Is this copywriting or editing?
Neither. This is structural diagnosis. I analyze flow, pressure, and sequencing — not wording, tone, or style.
Q: Will you rewrite my copy or do revisions?
No. I do not rewrite or optimize language. I diagnose the structural failure preventing conversion so you can correct it precisely. Revisions are limited to clarification only, not new analysis or expanded scope. If something I said is unclear, I will clarify it.
Q: What types of copy do you review?
VSLs, sales pages, landing pages, ads, and email sequences — especially offers that “almost work” but stall.
Q: Who is this gig best for?
Creators, founders, marketers, and copywriters who know their offer is strong but suspect the structure is killing momentum. This is not for clients seeking rewrites, copywriting, coaching, or strategy. I do not add words, rewrite sections, or suggest fixes — this is diagnosis only.
Q: What do you need from me to get started?
Submit your script as a Google Doc (Editor access). If your asset is a video (YouTube, Loom, VSL), include a full transcript. I do not audit PDFs, screenshots, or raw video. Shortened links and DM attachments are not opened.
Q: Will this guarantee higher conversions?
No. Diagnosis identifies failure. Execution determines results. This prevents wasted rewrites and bad decisions.
Q: What do I get in the Basic "VSL Lead Diagnosis" package?
A focused Loom diagnosis (up to 2 min) of your first 500 words. I identify where prospects disengage (STOP), the first pressure leak, and the core failure mechanism collapsing conversion. Diagnosis only. No rewriting.
Q: What do I get in the Standard "Structural Failure Audit" package?
A Loom forensic analysis of your first 1,000 words. I identify the primary STOP (pressure peak), major pressure leaks, and dominant failure mechanism. Includes a written Kill List (up to 5 items) showing exactly which lines should be removed and why. Structural diagnosis only. No rewriting.
Q: What do I get in the Premium "Forensic Conversion Autopsy" package?
A full-chain forensic audit of your first 2,000 words (lead through offer transition). I trace multiple STOPs (pressure peaks), where pressure breaks, and interacting failure mechanisms. Includes Loom analysis and a comprehensive written failure map. Diagnosis only.
Q: What is a a "Failure Map"?
A failure map is a written breakdown showing where your script loses pressure and allows mental escape. It highlights the exact lines and sections where urgency and necessity break down. It is a system-level analysis that goes deeper than the standard kill list.
