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I will give you bestseller feedback on your book or short story
International bestseller and screenwriter
Michaelbrent Collings is an internationally bestselling novelist; screenwriter; and only person who has ever been a finalist for a Bram Stoker Award (multiple times), a Dragon Award (mlutiple times), ...
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My books have sold hundreds of thousands of copies worldwide, with tens of millions of Kindle Unlimited page reads. Simply put, I know what makes stories work--both long and short--and I will provide a detailed analysis of your novel or short story, including notes on:
- Setup
- Plot
- Characters
- Prose/narrative style
- Dialogue
- Action
- My general impressions.
Ill also provide general grammar feedback (not a line edit, but I will let you know if I note consistent grammar issues).
This isn't a two-paragraph boilerplate feedback, either. Each story I take on is read carefully and hand-annotated. When I am finished you will get at LEAST two pages of feedback specific to your particular story and writing style.
PLEASE NOTE:
- This is for PROSE (novels, short stories, non-fiction books) only. If you have poetry, a screenplay, comic book or graphic novel, please CONTACT ME so I can give you a custom quote.
- I cannot assist with erotica. THIS IS NOT A JUDGMENT, either of literary quality or anything else. It's just a genre that's never appealed to me and I don't have the experience to help you properly with it.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Science fiction
Language:
English
Book type:
Fiction
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Clients I’ve worked with
J.F.Penn
Author
I reworked the cover copy for Joanna Penn's thrillers, written under the name JF Penn.
Oct 2021-Oct 2021
Barbara Freethy
Author
I provided back cover copy for Ms. Freethy's upcoming novel.
Dec 2021-Dec 2021
FAQ
Will my book or short story sell because of this?
No one - NO ONE - can ethically guarantee sales. But I'll bring decades' of experience and my status as a bestseller in a dozen different genres to help you polish your piece.
What if the piece I send is a TEENSY bit over the limit I pay for?
I will do a word count when I start and will cut off the piece after the paid-for limit. I won't even look at anything after that. Not trying to be a jerk, but as soon as I let things creep up "just a little," I start losing money and/or time - and this should be a win-win for us both.
Do you do critiques of full novels (over the limits mentioned in your gig)?
Sometimes, when I have the time. I bang out four to eight novels a year, in addition to scripts, so time is often short. Contact me and we'll work things out if possible.
Can I get a copy of your line notes - the redlined version of my work?
Some people like to see that in addition to my notes. Be forwarned: it's not me being nice, it's me slashing away like a pen-based samurai. But if you want that, contact me and it can be provided for an additional charge.
Will you critique ANY genre?
Any except erotica/pornography. I'm not judging you if that's what you write, but I'm not the guy for that. I've written bestsellers in just about everything else though - mystery, thriller, suspense, horror, sci-fi, fantasy, urban fantasy, humorous fiction, romance, and even non-fiction.
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Exceptional work. Not only did he provide detailed and comprehensive feedback on my manuscript, but he also delivered it faster than anticipated. The level of elaboration and depth in his analysis was remarkable. He provided very specific and useful suggestions for improvement.
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G gc_2023
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Exceptional work. Not only did he provide detailed and comprehensive feedback on my manuscript, but he also delivered it faster than anticipated. The level of elaboration and depth in his analysis was remarkable. He provided very specific and useful suggestions for improvement.
$400-$600
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6 days
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