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I will do developmental editing and plot critique for your fiction novel
Professional Book Editor, Line Editing, Fact Checking
Want to turn your raw drafts into bestselling, market-ready books that Amazon KDP readers rave about?
I'm a professional book editor specializing in non fiction and fiction manuscript editing. I deli...
About this Gig
Is your thriller, mystery, or fantasy novel ready for a deep structural evaluation? Before you publish or send your draft for line editing, your plot, pacing, and character arcs must hold readers captive from chapter one to the final twist.
As a dedicated developmental editor and novel editor, I analyze your manuscript to identify plot holes, pacing lulls, narrative inconsistencies, and weak character motivations. I provide clear, constructive guidance to help you elevate your storytelling and create a seamless reading experience.
What You Will Receive:
- Comprehensive Editorial Reader Report assessing plot structure, pacing, and character arcs.
- Detailed inline margin notes throughout your manuscript document.
- Evaluation of world building, chapter endings, suspense, and tension.
- Actionable recommendations to strengthen your draft's core narrative.
Why Choose Me:
- Focused expertise in thriller, mystery, fantasy, and sci-fi fiction.
- Objective, encouraging, and actionable structural critique.
- Clear communication aimed at preserving your creative vision.
Ready to transform your draft into an unputdownable story? Send me a message or place your order today!
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is the difference between developmental editing and line editing?
Developmental editing focuses on big-picture story elements: plot structure, pacing, character development, and world-building. Line editing focuses on sentence-level flow, grammar, and tone.
What genres do you specialize in for developmental editing?
I specialize in thrillers, mysteries, crime fiction, fantasy, sci-fi, LitRPG, and speculative fiction.
What does the Editorial Reader Report include?
The report covers plot structure, pacing analysis, character arc evaluations, world-building consistency, dialogue effectiveness, and actionable rewrite recommendations.
Will you rewrite my sentences during a developmental edit?
No. Developmental editing addresses structural story mechanics. I leave detailed inline margin notes and suggestions, but you retain full creative control over rewrites.
How are the margin comments delivered?
All margin notes and structural comments are embedded directly inside your Microsoft Word document using standard Track Changes / Comments.
Can I ask questions after receiving my delivery?
Absolutely! Premium packages include follow-up consultation in the inbox so we can discuss the editorial feedback and brainstorming next steps.
Do you accept full fantasy or sci-fi novels over 80,000 words?
Yes! For epic fantasy, sci-fi, or sagas over 80,000 words, message me directly for a custom timeline and pricing offer.
Is my story idea and plot kept confidential?
Yes, 100%. Your intellectual property, world-building notes, and plot details remain strictly confidential and secure.
Can you evaluate an incomplete draft or detailed outline?
Yes! If you have a detailed outline or partial draft and want to catch plot holes early, send me a message for a custom offer.
Do you offer a sample critique before a full order?
Yes! Message me with a 1,000-word excerpt from your story, and I will provide a complimentary sample critique so you can review my feedback style.
