I will alpha read your writing, giving feedback on your draft
Author and Writing Coach: Outlining, Editing, Consulting, Ghostwriting
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About this Gig
Statistics say that 97% of people that start a book never finish! This is why I strongly recommend writers have a professional alpha reader.
As your alpha reader, I provide feedback both as a reader and as a writing coach. This means that I speak about my experience reading your draft and provide professional editorial/writing advice throughout.
Whether you're writing fiction or nonfiction, alpha reading can help motivate you to keep writing, improving, and ultimately finish that book!
It can also be provided at your own pace. Alpha reading can be done on a chapter-by-chapter basis, or for finished manuscripts as well.
Each order includes:
- Line-by-line comments throughout your manuscript
- Editorial suggestions throughout your manuscript
- Overview Analysis (reader report) for each chapter/section
- Writing Advice
Unlike other editors/readers, I don't just point out errors; I guide and teach writers how to improve! The goal of my feedback is to help writers see their strengths and weaknesses and elevate their writing to the next level.
Reach out if you have questions or a word count not listed.
(Please no NSFW)
I look forward to serving you.
-Michael Jaymes
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing
Books Publishing
Twisted Key Publishing offered me the opportunity to write for them in the fall of 2020. About six months later, I had my debut book The Secret Fountain published with them.
Sep 2020-Feb 2021
My Portfolio
FAQ
What Makes You Qualified?
Studying engaging writing since 2019, I’ve published 3 books, helped many writers do the same, and have had clients go on to be featured in the news/magazines, reach Amazon’s best-seller list, and receive awards. I've also worked professionally alongside script and documentary writers for Netflix.
Why Should I Consider Receiving An Alpha Read?
Having an alpha reader during/after the first draft helps ensure the manuscript doesn't have major issues. Some writers will rush to complete a book only to be discouraged when their editor says major changes are needed before publishing. An alpha read helps avoid this by catching mistakes early!
What Genres Do You Alpha Read?
Whether the genre is listed above or not, feel free to message me. I work with both fiction and nonfiction writers within a variety of genres! :)
Do You Alpha Read Fiction And Nonfiction?
Yes! :) I have studied writing styles both for fiction and nonfiction writing, and would be happy to read whatever you're writing. Reach out if it's a sensitive or research-heavy subject that you want to ask about first.
What's The Difference Between Alpha Reading And Beta Reading?
Alpha reading mainly focuses on plot, writing style, and execution, done (usually) during or immediately following the first draft. This helps your writing improve as you go and promises a cleaner draft. Beta reading typically focuses more on the reader experience and expectations within the genre.
What Kind Of Editing Style And Feedback Does Your Alpha Reading Include?
My Alpha Reading is similar to receiving line edits and developmental editing all-in-one. The difference is that I focus my feedback around highlighting the most important suggestions I have to improve a manuscript as a whole. I also focus heavily on providing writing advice to help writers learn.
What If My Word Count Differs From Your Offered Packages?
Please contact me before ordering, and I will send you a custom offer based on your specific word count. :)
What If I Already Finished My Book?
If you already finished your book, I'd still be happy to look it over for you and help provide suggestions for a another draft. Alpha reading is very similar to developmental editing or an evaluation edit, so this will still be a benefit to you whether the book is completed or not. :)
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P polarbera

United States
Great experience, insightful, and very helpful. As someone with no formal education or training in writing, this helped a lot.
$400-$600
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2 weeks
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Helpful?B brodieyoung97

United Kingdom
Michael is a proactive communicator, as well as a personable and astute editor. He's a pleasure to deal with and well worth the price.
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?T travisjames77
Repeat Client

United States
I'm a returning client and intend to work together more. Great feedback, so helpful!
$200-$400
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9 days
Duration
Helpful?T travisjames77
Repeat Client

United States
Very helpful notes on my Prologue. I'm looking forward to working together more. Highly recommend!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
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Helpful?D dmyze107
Repeat Client

United States
Incredible experience! Detailed, organized feedback from someone who really knows story and story structure, as well as genuinely wants to help other writers be the best they can. Notes were helpful without being overly critical—pointing out what's working, what's unclear or muddy, and how to tighten...
$200-$400
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13 days
Duration
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89 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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P polarbera

United States
Great experience, insightful, and very helpful. As someone with no formal education or training in writing, this helped a lot.
$400-$600
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?B brodieyoung97

United Kingdom
Michael is a proactive communicator, as well as a personable and astute editor. He's a pleasure to deal with and well worth the price.
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?T travisjames77
Repeat Client

United States
I'm a returning client and intend to work together more. Great feedback, so helpful!
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?T travisjames77
Repeat Client

United States
Very helpful notes on my Prologue. I'm looking forward to working together more. Highly recommend!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?D dmyze107
Repeat Client

United States
Incredible experience! Detailed, organized feedback from someone who really knows story and story structure, as well as genuinely wants to help other writers be the best they can. Notes were helpful without being overly critical—pointing out what's working, what's unclear or muddy, and how to tighten...
$200-$400
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?

