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Author and Writing Coach: Outlining, Editing, Consulting, Ghostwriting
My name is Michael Jaymes. I am an author, editor, coach, and manager of a professional ghostwriting team. We help aspiring fiction and nonfiction authors elevate their ideas.
I have been both studyi...
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About this Gig
Is your story hitting all the right notes?
One of the great dangers of not hiring a developmental editor is having a plot or characters fall flat!
As a developmental editor, I focus on essential elements that make stories craveable: Conflict, Context, and Change.
Whether you're writing fiction or nonfiction, these pillars drive reader engagement and ensure the plot / message of a story is received.
- Conflict: I'll review your plot, ensuring compelling obstacles and drama propel your story forward.
- Context: I'll ensure you strike the perfect balance of information - clear, immersive, and never overwhelming.
- Change: I'll look for powerful character and plot arcs that resonate deeply with readers, leaving a lasting impact.
My line comments and chapter-by-chapter feedback pinpoints exactly where these elements excel or need strengthening, providing actionable insights every step of the way.
I've served hundreds of writers as a full-time writing coach and editor, and you can trust that my focus and goal is to ultimately help you elevate your writing.
Ready to make your book unforgettable? Invest in your story and your success!
I look forward to serving you.
-Michael Jaymes
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Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing
Books Publishing
Twisted Key Publishing offered me the opportunity to write for them in the fall of 2020. About six months later, I had my debut book The Secret Fountain published with them.
Sep 2020-Feb 2021
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FAQ
What Makes You Qualified?
Studying engaging writing since 2019, I’ve published 3 books, helped many writers do the same, and have had clients go on to be featured in the news/magazines, reach Amazon’s best-seller list, and receive awards. I've also worked professionally alongside script and documentary writers for Netflix.
Why Should I Consider Receiving A Developmental Edit?
Developmental editing reveals structural flaws and strengthens your story's foundation. It can lead to uncovering plot holes, boosting reader engagement, and even polishing prose before publishing.
What Genres Do You Offer Developmental Editing For?
Whether the genre is listed above or not, feel free to message me. I work with both fiction and nonfiction writers within a variety of genres! :)
Do You Offer Developmental Editing For Fiction And Nonfiction?
Yes! :) I have studied writing styles both for fiction and nonfiction writing, and would be happy to read whatever you're writing. Reach out if it's a sensitive or research-heavy subject that you want to ask about first.
What If My Word Count Differs From Your Offered Packages?
Please contact me before ordering, and I will send you a custom offer based on your specific word count. :)
Are You A Published Author?
Yes, I have published works that you can find by searching "Michael Jaymes" on Amazon.
Should I Have A Finished Manuscript Before Getting Developmental Editing?
If you're still working on a first draft and have not completed your book, you are still welcome to reach out! I'd be happy to provide advice and feedback on what you have, or even providing suggestions on what you can implement. :)
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Helpful?A anna_perepel
United States
Lots of valuable feedback! Got me thinking and pushed me in the right direction.
$200-$400
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Helpful?A aknewyork
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Very detail oriented. Incredible value!
$50-$100
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United States
I like to work with Michael, he tried to understand you before the work, and the work he delivered was detailed, and professional, look forward to working with him again.
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kh1951
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Great job!
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V vern2026
Germany
Thanks for great insights
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?A anna_perepel
United States
Lots of valuable feedback! Got me thinking and pushed me in the right direction.
$200-$400
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?A aknewyork
United States
Very detail oriented. Incredible value!
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?O onenessld
Repeat Client
United States
I like to work with Michael, he tried to understand you before the work, and the work he delivered was detailed, and professional, look forward to working with him again.
$600-$800
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kh1951
United States
Great job!
$100-$200
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3 days
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