I will do an evaluation edit with writing feedback and suggestions

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

810 orders completed

Author and Writing Coach: Outlining, Editing, Consulting, Ghostwriting

My name is Michael Jaymes. I am an author, editor, coach, and manager of a professional ghostwriting team. We help aspiring fiction and nonfiction authors elevate their ideas. I have been both studyi...

Top Rated

Top Rated sellers are individually selected by Fiverr after meeting specific benchmarks for quality and service.

About this Gig

Maybe you've written a book, or you're in the process of writing one, but you need help. Your stuck or don't know where to begin with revisions. What now?!


Don't worry! That's where an evaluation edit can come in handy. :)

An evaluation edit includes:

  • Line editing (writing) feedback
  • Writing advice
  • Developmental editing (structural) feedback
  • Story/Message advice


As your evaluation editor, I will assess what you've written and provide professional feedback and suggestions on how it can improve. Not only will I provide recommendations, but I'll go over HOW you can fix things.


I care for every writer I work with and desire for them to grow! This means I won't just give editing feedback saying, "I don't like this." I will provide advice and actionable steps on how to improve your draft or manuscript.


For fiction, some of the topics I may touch on in my feedback: character development, plot holes, setting, pacing, etc.


For nonfiction, I may focus on other topics such as: research included, style, message, clarity, etc.


If you're looking for a writing coach and editor that cares about seeing you and your book improve, then reach out! You won't be disappointed.

-Michael Jaymes

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Business management

Children’s books

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing

Twisted Key Publishing

Books Publishing

Twisted Key Publishing offered me the opportunity to write for them in the fall of 2020. About six months later, I had my debut book The Secret Fountain published with them.

Sep 2020-Feb 2021

My Portfolio

Other Book Editing Services I Offer

Reviews

17 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(17)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M

    massey0331

    US

    United States

    5

    I highly recommend Michael Jaymes. He provided thoughtful and meaningful responses from the beginning. He is also very polite and professional. I am pleased with the manuscript editing and feedback provided.

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    terror_wolf_0

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Always a big help with going forward with the story.

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    terror_wolf_0

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Appreciate all the work they put into helping guide my story.

    $200-$400

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • X

    xtremechocoholi

    US

    United States

    5

    Michael James did a fine job of understanding the write up and offering his professionalism when marking the story up.

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    eleanorloaring

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Michael Jaymes has absolutely exceeded my expectations with his experience, attention to detail and professionalism! I hope to continue working with him on my novel. Highly recommended! 👏

    $200-$400

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

17 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(17)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • M

    massey0331

    US

    United States

    5

    I highly recommend Michael Jaymes. He provided thoughtful and meaningful responses from the beginning. He is also very polite and professional. I am pleased with the manuscript editing and feedback provided.

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    terror_wolf_0

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Always a big help with going forward with the story.

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    terror_wolf_0

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Appreciate all the work they put into helping guide my story.

    $200-$400

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • X

    xtremechocoholi

    US

    United States

    5

    Michael James did a fine job of understanding the write up and offering his professionalism when marking the story up.

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    eleanorloaring

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Michael Jaymes has absolutely exceeded my expectations with his experience, attention to detail and professionalism! I hope to continue working with him on my novel. Highly recommended! 👏

    $200-$400

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No