I will line edit your book, providing line by line feedback
Gig Summary
Author and Writing Coach: Outlining, Editing, Consulting, Ghostwriting
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About this Gig
When line editing, I do more than just tighten/elevate your writing, I take three things into account: Clarity, Consistency, and Conciseness.
Whether you are writing nonfiction or fiction, these three things are crucial to consider in order for your book to be written well.
- Clarity refers to whether each sentence is easily understandable.
- Consistency refers to ensuring the voice, tone, and style of writing matches throughout the book as a whole.
- Conciseness refers to removing fluff, repetition, and unwanted rhythm within the writing.
When I line edit a book, I provide tracked changes throughout each chapter, as well as giving a short summary at the end of the chapter to highlight anything I thought was done well or needs work.
As a full-time writing coach, I have worked with hundreds of writers on their books. You can be confident I will provide you with the same quality and focus to detail as I provided them. :) You won't be disappointed.
If you have any questions, feel free to reach out.
I look forward to serving you.
Best Regards,
-Michael Jaymes
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing
Books Publishing
Twisted Key Publishing offered me the opportunity to write for them in the fall of 2020. About six months later, I had my debut book The Secret Fountain published with them.
Sep 2020-Feb 2021
My Portfolio
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What If My Word Count Is Not Listed Above?
Reach out! I'd be happy to provide a custom quote for you.
Are You A Published Author?
Yes, I have published works that you can find by searching "Michael Jaymes" on Amazon.
How Do I Know I Can Trust Your Feedback?
Choose the cheapest option for a sample edit on 500 words of your work. Send me any chapter you want. This way, you can see if you're happy with my feedback style, and decide if you want to work with me before spending more. :)
What genres do you offer Line Editing for?
Whether the genre is listed above or not, feel free to message me. I work with a lot of clients within a variety of genres! :)
Why are your delivery times so long?
Due to a high volume of orders, I am not always able to begin a project the day the order is placed. Please contact me if you'd like to know when you will fit in my schedule, as sometimes I can get people in earlier than the delivery dates set on the gig page.
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D dano019

United States
Professional & Polished Michael was incredible to work with—kind, fast, and extremely skilled. His edits elevated my story in all the right ways, and his feedback gave me clear direction for improving my writing overall. I’ll absolutely be working with him again. A true 5-star experience.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?E ericbeckwith665

United States
Excellent work
$50-$100
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4 days
Duration
Helpful?F 
freenzygirl

United States
Ongoing collaborationMichael was detailed beyond what I ever expected. His line edit was incredibly thorough, and he explained everything with such clarity that it was easy to jump back in and improve my work. As a first-time author, I had so many nerves going into this process, but Michael’s patience, encouragement, and...
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F 
freenzygirl

United States
Ongoing collaborationMichael provided an excellent sample of his work base on the information I provided. This allowed me to understand his process before placing a full order. Even with this initial sample, he was incredibly detailed and thorough. His notes were clear and included examples that helped me grasp his feedback...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?B 
brokerpat

United States
Ongoing collaborationMicheal is a first-class professional. His enthusiastic approach and helpful ideas result in stellar work products.
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
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D dano019

United States
Professional & Polished Michael was incredible to work with—kind, fast, and extremely skilled. His edits elevated my story in all the right ways, and his feedback gave me clear direction for improving my writing overall. I’ll absolutely be working with him again. A true 5-star experience.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?E ericbeckwith665

United States
Excellent work
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?F 
freenzygirl

United States
Ongoing collaborationMichael was detailed beyond what I ever expected. His line edit was incredibly thorough, and he explained everything with such clarity that it was easy to jump back in and improve my work. As a first-time author, I had so many nerves going into this process, but Michael’s patience, encouragement, and...
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F 
freenzygirl

United States
Ongoing collaborationMichael provided an excellent sample of his work base on the information I provided. This allowed me to understand his process before placing a full order. Even with this initial sample, he was incredibly detailed and thorough. His notes were clear and included examples that helped me grasp his feedback...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?B 
brokerpat

United States
Ongoing collaborationMicheal is a first-class professional. His enthusiastic approach and helpful ideas result in stellar work products.
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?

