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Expert Developmental Editor
My name is Michelle and I write middle-grade fantasy books. I just finished my first book Alex Murphy and the Golden Ram. When I am not writing, I am an avid reader, book blogger, bookstagrammer, book...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
nikita_luck
Australia
Michelle provided an in depth report for my novel with an analysis on what needed work while also highlighting parts I did well - I really appreciated this!...
individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
tylerttk
United States
Working with Michelle to Alpha read my novel was fantastic! She gave excellent insight and really took the time to understand the work. She made some great...
b_joss
United States
Fantastic work. She left detailed notes that really proved she was engaging with the text. Her advice was reasonable, polite, and helpful. She even pointed...
cynzin
United States
Working with Michelle was wonderful! She provided thorough and helpful feedback about my story in a timely manner. Her insights were well organized and thoughtful....
About this Gig
Are you a brand new writer, and need help finding someone to read your less-than-perfect manuscript? Have you finished a few chapters and want to make sure your story is headed in the right direction? Are you just lost in your story and need a second pair of eyes?
I can help. I will quickly provide a low-cost critique of your short story or novel. I love to read books of all kinds--any genre or level of completion.
I accept all manuscripts--whether it's a short story, a few chapters, or a sweeping epic fantasy. This listing is for anyone looking for an alpha reader, which means your manuscript can be a hot mess. An alpha reader is the first person you show your story to, even before an editor.
Please do not hesitate to send me a less than perfectly edited manuscript. (This service does not include editing, but I will give you a heads up when I notice typos.)
I will read it and tell you what I loved and what I didn't love quite as much. If you are looking for a harsh or brutal reader, that is not me. I strive to provide gentle but honest criticism that will motivate you to continue your writing journey. Let me know how I can help you.
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N nikita_luck
Australia
Michelle provided an in depth report for my novel with an analysis on what needed work while also highlighting parts I did well - I really appreciated this! She responded quickly to my initial query and delivered before the deadline. I highly recommend!
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?I individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?T tylerttk
United States
Working with Michelle to Alpha read my novel was fantastic! She gave excellent insight and really took the time to understand the work. She made some great points and comments which I will happily be taking and using to improve my story!
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?B b_joss
United States
Fantastic work. She left detailed notes that really proved she was engaging with the text. Her advice was reasonable, polite, and helpful. She even pointed out typos, although I had only asked for “big picture” feedback. I got everything I paid for and more.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?C cynzin
United States
Working with Michelle was wonderful! She provided thorough and helpful feedback about my story in a timely manner. Her insights were well organized and thoughtful. She went above and beyond and I highly recommend working with her!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
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N nikita_luck
Australia
Michelle provided an in depth report for my novel with an analysis on what needed work while also highlighting parts I did well - I really appreciated this! She responded quickly to my initial query and delivered before the deadline. I highly recommend!
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?I individ_author
United States
The review I got as an alpha reading was exceptional. I've read through the comments and I'm able to shape now how I think I should go about my novel! I appreciate the timeliness of the work and the quality itself.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?T tylerttk
United States
Working with Michelle to Alpha read my novel was fantastic! She gave excellent insight and really took the time to understand the work. She made some great points and comments which I will happily be taking and using to improve my story!
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
M Seller's Response
Helpful?B b_joss
United States
Fantastic work. She left detailed notes that really proved she was engaging with the text. Her advice was reasonable, polite, and helpful. She even pointed out typos, although I had only asked for “big picture” feedback. I got everything I paid for and more.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?C cynzin
United States
Working with Michelle was wonderful! She provided thorough and helpful feedback about my story in a timely manner. Her insights were well organized and thoughtful. She went above and beyond and I highly recommend working with her!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
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