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I will critique your novel or manuscript with developmental feedback
Helping Authors Write, Polish and Promote Their Books
Writing a book is only the beginning. From ghostwriting and manuscript editing to professional formatting, book cover design, and author visibility, I help writers turn their ideas and manuscripts int...
About this Gig
Finished your manuscript but still wondering, Does my story actually work?
I provide professional manuscript critique and developmental feedback to help authors identify what is working, what needs improvement, and how to strengthen their stories before publishing.
I can evaluate your:
- Plot & story structure
- Character development & character arcs
- Pacing & story flow
- Scenes, conflict & tension
- Chapter flow & continuity
- Reader engagement
- Areas that feel rushed, confusing, repetitive or underdeveloped
You'll receive clear, honest and actionable feedback not just a list of problems. I'll explain why something may not be working and suggest practical ways to improve it.
I work with novels, fiction, short stories, memoirs and other manuscripts.
Your story remains yours. I won't rewrite your manuscript in my voice or change your creative direction. My role is to help you see your manuscript clearly and give you a practical revision roadmap.
If you need a developmental editor, manuscript critique, novel editor or honest feedback before publishing, I'm here to help.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What type of manuscripts do you critique?
I work with novels, fiction, short stories, memoirs, and other book-length manuscripts. If you're unsure whether your project fits, feel free to contact me before ordering.
What does your developmental feedback cover?
I look at areas such as plot, story structure, character development, pacing, scenes, conflict, continuity, and overall reader engagement.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. This service focuses on critique and developmental feedback. I’ll identify areas that need attention, explain why, and provide actionable revision suggestions while respecting your voice and creative direction.
Will I receive feedback on every chapter?
This depends on the package you choose. The higher packages include more detailed chapter and scene-level feedback.
Do you provide proofreading or copy editing?
This gig focuses on developmental editing and manuscript critique rather than grammar or proofreading. If you need copy editing or proofreading, please contact me.
What do you need from me before starting?
Please provide your manuscript, genre, target audience, and any specific concerns or questions you want me to pay attention to.
