I will beta read your fantasy manuscript with detailed in line comments

I provide detailed beta reading from the perspective of an engaged reader while offering constructive feedback to help strengthen your manuscript. I do NOT use AI.

Youll receive:

• Inline comments throughout your manuscript
• Honest reader reactions
•  Character feedback
•  Plot and pacing analysis
•  World building feedback (where applicable)
•  Romance and emotional impact
•  Confusing or slow sections
• A comprehensive reader report with strengths and suggestions

I read across multiple genres, with particular experience in fantasy, romantasy, dark romance, psychological thrillers, science fiction, and horror.

As an active ARC reviewer who reads around 100 books each year, I focus on providing balanced, actionable feedback while respecting your voice as an author.

I also have experience as a writer myself, having self-published on Amazon and spent years working on a fantasy series. Because of that, I especially appreciate the amount of work, creativity, and passion that goes into storytelling.

Please message me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds the listed word counts or if you have specific feedback requests.