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Millie I. is unavailable until Sep 20, 2026
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I will alpha or beta read your story
Gig Summary
Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
sj_crawford
Canada
I have worked with Millie many times before, and I had a great experience with my latest project. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments...
gabimaries
United States
Millie provided fantastic feedback on my novel! Her in line comments were a delight to read and the report she provided highlighted exactly what worked and what could use improvement. Thank you!!
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her...
gummybear8
United States
Great beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
shannonlizball
United States
Millie did a great job working with me. She was very responsive and worked hard to get my novel read in a week!
About this Gig
Romance Authors, Need a Fresh Perspective?
You've written a love story, but now you're wondering how to make it truly swoon-worthy. Let me help you polish your romance into a masterpiece readers wont forget.
What I Offer:
- Plot: Does the romance flow? Are twists believable?
- Characters: Are your lovers compelling and relatable?
- Pacing: Does the love story build naturally?
- Setting: Is the world immersive and enhances the romance?
- Writing style: Does your voice capture the emotions of love?
Bonus: My honest (and meme-filled!) reactions as I experience your story, because feedback can be fun too!
Note: I focus on big-picture feedback. No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-writing.
Lets work together to bring your story to life!
Contact me before purchasing to discuss your project.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
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Spanish
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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S sj_crawford
Canada
Ongoing collaborationI have worked with Millie many times before, and I had a great experience with my latest project. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments on my manuscript as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations and was incredibly useful for my writing. I...
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G gabimaries
United States
Millie provided fantastic feedback on my novel! Her in line comments were a delight to read and the report she provided highlighted exactly what worked and what could use improvement. Thank you!!
$50
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?V 
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G 
gummybear8
United States
Ongoing collaborationGreat beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?S shannonlizball
United States
Millie did a great job working with me. She was very responsive and worked hard to get my novel read in a week!
$50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
92 reviews for this Gig
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
S sj_crawford
Canada
Ongoing collaborationI have worked with Millie many times before, and I had a great experience with my latest project. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments on my manuscript as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations and was incredibly useful for my writing. I...
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G gabimaries
United States
Millie provided fantastic feedback on my novel! Her in line comments were a delight to read and the report she provided highlighted exactly what worked and what could use improvement. Thank you!!
$50
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?V verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G gummybear8
United States
Ongoing collaborationGreat beta reader with insightful and helpful comments. I loved the honesty on what was working and what wasn't working. Will be back for my next manuscript. Thank you!
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?S shannonlizball
United States
Millie did a great job working with me. She was very responsive and worked hard to get my novel read in a week!
$50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
