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Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
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Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave...
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her...
sj_crawford
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The...
havencap
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
ellamae04
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
About this Gig
Romance Authors, Need a Fresh Perspective?
You've written a love story, but now you're wondering how to make it truly swoon-worthy. Let me help you polish your romance into a masterpiece readers wont forget.
What I Offer:
- Plot: Does the romance flow? Are twists believable?
- Characters: Are your lovers compelling and relatable?
- Pacing: Does the love story build naturally?
- Setting: Is the world immersive and enhances the romance?
- Writing style: Does your voice capture the emotions of love?
Bonus: My honest (and meme-filled!) reactions as I experience your story, because feedback can be fun too!
Note: I focus on big-picture feedback. No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-writing.
Lets work together to bring your story to life!
Contact me before purchasing to discuss your project.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
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Spanish
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88 reviews for this Gig
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C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?V 
verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford
Repeat Client
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations, and was incredibly useful for my writing. I would recommend Millie for beta reading and will definitely return for future projects.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?H havencap
Repeat Client
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
ellamae04
Repeat Client
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
88 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
C cm_havencraft
United States
Millie was very helpful in writing a little report that covered my characters, plot, pacing, writing style, and general experience with my book's plot. It gave me a lot to think about, and of course, she did so rather swiftly, considering the size of the book. I will be coming back!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?V verityvideoads
Australia
Thank you for reading, for your comments and personal reactions (especially your reactions :) ) My client loved your report. There were many elements in her book she wasn't sure about and needed a critique. So she's very encouraged by your feedback and feel she's ready to do the final version and then publish it.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sj_crawford
Repeat Client
Canada
This was my second time working with Millie. She provided exceptionally detailed, genre-appropriate comments, as well as a comprehensive reader report. The feedback was beyond expectations, and was incredibly useful for my writing. I would recommend Millie for beta reading and will definitely return for future projects.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?H havencap
Repeat Client
United States
Millie was a pleasure to work with and I’m so glad we got to work together on my second project! I look forward to working together again
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?E ellamae04
Repeat Client
United States
AMAZING! I adore working with Millie to the highest extent. Her report is clear and helpful, and she answered down every question I had! 12/10 work as always and I can't wait to work with her again!
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
