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I will beta read your fantasy story
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Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Unleash the Magic in Your Fantasy Story!
Have you written a fantasy short story, novel, or novella that feels more like first-draft chaos than an epic masterpiece? I'm here to help you refine it into the book you've always dreamed of creating!
Ill dive into your world, sword in hand (figuratively!), and provide a detailed readers report covering:
- Plot: Does your quest captivate? Are the twists truly magical?
- Character: Are your heroes unforgettable, villains chilling, and sidekicks endearing?
- Pacing: Does the story flow like an ancient river or a galloping dragon?
- Setting: Is your world immersive, magical, and alive with detail?
- Writing Style: Does your prose dazzle, transport, and enchant?
Along with actionable feedback, you'll get a fun, meme-infused document of my reactions as I journey through your story, offering insight into how readers will experience it.
What I DON'T do:
No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-editing. My focus is on big-picture feedback to help you sharpen your narrative magic.
Ready to craft the next fantasy masterpiece? Lets collaborate!
(Contact me before purchasing so we can discuss your project in detail.)
Genre:
Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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L lightwilder
United Kingdom
This was really excellent feedback, and very helpful! Thank you!
$50
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3 days
Duration
Helpful?L lightwilder
United Kingdom
This was really excellent feedback, and very helpful! Thank you!
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?N 
nanashi101
United States
I have worked with her for a long period now. And its always enjoyable to continue working with her.
$50-$100
Price
4 months
Duration
Helpful?K krystlesi92
United Kingdom
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W 
westerntech
United States
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
$50
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
14 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
L lightwilder
United Kingdom
This was really excellent feedback, and very helpful! Thank you!
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?L lightwilder
United Kingdom
This was really excellent feedback, and very helpful! Thank you!
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?N nanashi101
United States
I have worked with her for a long period now. And its always enjoyable to continue working with her.
$50-$100
Price
4 months
Duration
Helpful?K krystlesi92
United Kingdom
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W westerntech
United States
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
$50
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
