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I will beta read your fantasy story
Romance Developmental Editing
Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
h_parker303
United States
I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She...
krystlesi92
United Kingdom
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
whytnieshannen
United States
Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.
About this Gig
Unleash the Magic in Your Fantasy Story!
Have you written a fantasy short story, novel, or novella that feels more like first-draft chaos than an epic masterpiece? I'm here to help you refine it into the book you've always dreamed of creating!
Ill dive into your world, sword in hand (figuratively!), and provide a detailed readers report covering:
- Plot: Does your quest captivate? Are the twists truly magical?
- Character: Are your heroes unforgettable, villains chilling, and sidekicks endearing?
- Pacing: Does the story flow like an ancient river or a galloping dragon?
- Setting: Is your world immersive, magical, and alive with detail?
- Writing Style: Does your prose dazzle, transport, and enchant?
Along with actionable feedback, you'll get a fun, meme-infused document of my reactions as I journey through your story, offering insight into how readers will experience it.
What I DON'T do:
No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-editing. My focus is on big-picture feedback to help you sharpen your narrative magic.
Ready to craft the next fantasy masterpiece? Lets collaborate!
(Contact me before purchasing so we can discuss your project in detail.)
Genre:
Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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westerntech
United States
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
Up to $50
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3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?H 
h_parker303
United States
I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.
Up to $50
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9 days
Duration
Helpful?K krystlesi92
United Kingdom
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W whytnieshannen
United States
Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?B bmat2000
United States
Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!
Up to $50
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7 days
Duration
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11 reviews for this Gig
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W westerntech
United States
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
Up to $50
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?H h_parker303
United States
I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?K krystlesi92
United Kingdom
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?W whytnieshannen
United States
Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.
Up to $50
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?B bmat2000
United States
Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
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