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I will be your childrens book structure and line editor
Editor and writer with experience in a traditional publisher
Hello! My name is Millie, and I'm a 25-year-old editor and writer from the UK. I have collaborated with a spectrum of clients, ranging from publishing houses and book packagers to self-published autho...
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What people loved about this freelancer
brystal_mn
United States
I wouldn't trust any editor other than Millie! She was PHENOMENAL! I was very impressed with her outstanding story-editing skills, and she was quick to return...
zasifawan
Australia
Millie provided excellent editing services for our children's STEM book. She successfully improved the overall flow and reading cadence while ensuring that...
m_scott24
United States
Thank you so much for line editing my little book. I am very happy with your edits and thank you for your knowledge and experience with editing. I would definitely rehire Millie for any future books I write.
taylorblair67
United States
This is my 2nd book I've had Millie review and line edit for me. She is attentive, quick, and adaptable. My book was over 1,200 words instead of 1,000 and she...
kayleentorres
United States
Thank you so much, Millie for reviewing my first children's book. She gave great feedback and it was a quick turn around.
About this Gig
Hello!
My name is Millie, and I am a 25-year-old editor and writer from the UK. I have six years of freelance experience, and I worked as a Development Editor at an award-winning children's book publisher. I am also a traditionally published children's non-fiction author. I am happy to work on books intended for any age group, from picture books to new adult fiction.
Each Gig includes:
- An edited draft with tracked changes and comments
- Feedback
What is a structural and line edit?
- Looking at overall structure to improve readability
- Remove redundancy, cliches, unnecessary words, sentences & paragraphs to improve tension, clarity & flow
- Restructure sentences or paragraphs to improve tension, clarity & flow
- Make word choice improvements
- Check dialogue flow & believability
- Make suggestions for further improvement
- Sample rewrites
I look forward to working with you!
Note: I do NOT use AI.
Language:
English
Genre:
Children’s books
Audience :
Children
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Teen / young adult
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
Why are copy editing and proofreading not included in your Gig?
Copy editing and proofreading are separate stages in the editorial process. The process is as follows: developmental, structure and line, copy edit, proofread. Feel free to contat me if your book has already had a structure and line edit. I am happy to discuss copy edits and proofreads.
Is English your native language?
Yes - I have lived in England all my life, but can adapt to US spelling.
Do you offer formatting services for my children's book?
No
What are your requirements?
Please send me your document, word count and an idea of the target audience. I only work in Microsoft Word and use track changes, so please send your manuscript as a word document.
How many times will you edit my story per package?
Once. If you'd like me to go over it again, you'd need to purchase another gig - edits are open for discussion, though.
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brystal_mn
United States
I wouldn't trust any editor other than Millie! She was PHENOMENAL! I was very impressed with her outstanding story-editing skills, and she was quick to return my edits. This is my first time doing something like this, and I hope to make this a fun hobby for my future. I had a lot of errors, but Millie...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?Z zasifawan
Australia
Millie provided excellent editing services for our children's STEM book. She successfully improved the overall flow and reading cadence while ensuring that the technical engineering concepts remained accurate and accessible for our target age group. Her edits added great clarity to the manuscript. Communication...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M m_scott24
United States
Thank you so much for line editing my little book. I am very happy with your edits and thank you for your knowledge and experience with editing. I would definitely rehire Millie for any future books I write.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?T taylorblair67
Repeat Client
United States
This is my 2nd book I've had Millie review and line edit for me. She is attentive, quick, and adaptable. My book was over 1,200 words instead of 1,000 and she was able to do a small $5 charge for the extra words so I didn't have to jump up to the 2,000 word edit. I appreciate that she will call out a...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?K kayleentorres
United States
Thank you so much, Millie for reviewing my first children's book. She gave great feedback and it was a quick turn around.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
630 reviews for this Gig
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| (8) | ||
| (2) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
B brystal_mn
United States
I wouldn't trust any editor other than Millie! She was PHENOMENAL! I was very impressed with her outstanding story-editing skills, and she was quick to return my edits. This is my first time doing something like this, and I hope to make this a fun hobby for my future. I had a lot of errors, but Millie...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?Z zasifawan
Australia
Millie provided excellent editing services for our children's STEM book. She successfully improved the overall flow and reading cadence while ensuring that the technical engineering concepts remained accurate and accessible for our target age group. Her edits added great clarity to the manuscript. Communication...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M m_scott24
United States
Thank you so much for line editing my little book. I am very happy with your edits and thank you for your knowledge and experience with editing. I would definitely rehire Millie for any future books I write.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?T taylorblair67
Repeat Client
United States
This is my 2nd book I've had Millie review and line edit for me. She is attentive, quick, and adaptable. My book was over 1,200 words instead of 1,000 and she was able to do a small $5 charge for the extra words so I didn't have to jump up to the 2,000 word edit. I appreciate that she will call out a...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?K kayleentorres
United States
Thank you so much, Millie for reviewing my first children's book. She gave great feedback and it was a quick turn around.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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