I will give detailed developmental feedback on your novel
Book Coach and Author
About this Gig
Is your manuscript ready for agents, editors, or self-publishing? Get honest, specific feedback on whats working, what isnt, and exactly how to fix it.
Im a [genre] reader and editor with [X years / X manuscripts] of experience. I read your full manuscript and deliver a detailed editorial letter covering:
Plot structure and pacing
Character development and motivation
Dialogue, voice, and point of view
Worldbuilding and consistency
Opening hook and ending payoff
Marketability for your genre
You wont get vague praise or a pile of line edits. Youll get a clear, prioritized roadmap for your next draft, with specific examples from your pages.
I work in: fantasy, romance, thriller, YA, literary fiction, and historical fiction.
Please message me before ordering so we can confirm genre, word count, and timeline. Your manuscript stays confidential, and I never share or reuse your work.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you line edit or proofread?
No. This is big-picture feedback. I offer proofreading and copyediting as a separate gig
Do you read my full manuscript?
Yes, every word.
Is my work kept private?
Yes, always.

