I will provide script coverage and screenplay notes

What Im Offering

Detailed studio-level feedback without the Hollywood ego? I'll dive into your script, highlight your pros/cons, and hand back a roadmap you can actually follow.

Milestones

1. Upload & Brief - You send the PDF + two burning questions (e.g., pacing, dialogue).
2. First Read - I grab a coffee, mark instinct reactions, and note the big ideas.
3. Deep Dive - Structure, stakes, character arcs, market fit, etc.
4. Delivery - Coverage doc + (for Standard/Premium) margin notes and prioritized fixes.
5. Revision / Q&A - I fine tune your package if you purchase the Premium package, and we hop on a live Zoom walkthrough.

What You Get

• Reader Pass - 2 page exec style coverage, verdict, and nextstep bullets.
• Deep Notes - 5 page breakdown + line level PDF comments.
• Rewrite Roadmap - Beat sheet outline, action priorities, and a 30 min call.

Add-ons: 24hr rush, extra revision, polish on 10 pages, pick your poison.

Why Me?

I'm an Air Force vet turned writer/director. 300+ scripts covered for a film finance company. Crew credits WB/DC, Apple TV+, Fox, NBC, and Sony/FX. I've seen what lands on exec desks and what hits the trash. Lets make sure yours lands in the right pile.