I will beta read your thriller novel and provide detailed manuscript feedback

4.7
4.7

Nigeria

I speak English

2 orders completed

Fazaqx Ghostwriting exprt

Hi, I’m Fazaqx, a fiction ghostwriter, story writer, and movie scriptwriter with 5 years of experience. I help authors and filmmakers turn ideas into engaging novels, short stories, movie scripts, and...
About this Gig

Professional Thriller Beta Reader and Manuscript Feedback

Finished your thriller but unsure if the suspense, twists, or pacing truly work? Many authors feel that way before publishing. A professional beta reader helps uncover plot holes, weak scenes, and missed opportunities before readers find them.

As your dedicated beta reader, I will carefully beta read your manuscript and provide honest manuscript feedback from a real reader's perspective. Whether you need a thriller beta reader, mystery beta reader, or alpha reader, you'll receive detailed insights designed to strengthen your story.

What I Will Review

Beta reading report

Thriller beta reader feedback

Manuscript feedback on pacing and suspense

Manuscript critique and plot analysis

Character development review

Plot holes and inconsistencies

Reader reactions to twists and reveals

Book critique and improvement suggestions

Mystery beta reader observations

Alpha reader feedback for early drafts

I beta read psychological thrillers, crime thrillers, suspense, mystery, horror, and related fiction.

A strong thriller keeps readers turning pages. My beta reading service helps ensure your story delivers tension, excitement, and satisfying

Genre:

Adventure

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Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Romance

Language:

English

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French

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    nate_sakamoto

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    Japan

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    4.7

    Currently working on a book with him (a continued project) and so far I've found his reviews and advice/commentary on the manuscripts to be incredibly eloquent, accurate, and well-pointed out. Great standard of work. The critique has been helping my own publication reach a notable level of polish that I didn't initially expect to achieve.

    $200-$400

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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Reviews

1 reviews for this Gig
4.7

(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • N

    nate_sakamoto

    JP

    Japan

    Ongoing collaboration
    4.7

    Currently working on a book with him (a continued project) and so far I've found his reviews and advice/commentary on the manuscripts to be incredibly eloquent, accurate, and well-pointed out. Great standard of work. The critique has been helping my own publication reach a notable level of polish that I didn't initially expect to achieve.

    $200-$400

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No