I will read and critique your childrens picture book or short story

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

18 orders completed

If you are a children's book writer in need of a serious and fair review of your work then look no further! I am an author and CEO of my own publishing company, as well as a homeschool teacher and wri...
About this Gig

**Please message me before placing an order to make sure we are a good fit.**


If you are a children's book writer in need of a serious and fair review of your work then look no further! I am an author and CEO of my own publishing company, as well as a homeschool teacher and writing coach. I offer my services as an avid reader of children's and Christian middle grade books due to my career and my own children's interest in these books.


My services include detailed notes on your story. I offer my professional opinion on how students might interact with the book.  I will evaluate your story and give suggestions on where it could be improved, focusing on different aspects such as plot, pacing, structure, character and use of language. I will make comments and suggestions line by line on the document itself but without changing anything - changes are completely up to you! 


This is a great choice if you need an honest, constructive critique. I also provide light edits and initial reactions/questions as I read, if the document is provided in a word document.  


Please also note that I am NOT a copywriter & won't comment on grammar/punctuation errors unless obvious.

Genre:

Children’s books

Language:

English

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Reviews

14 reviews for this Gig
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    lidiyav859

    US

    United States

    5

    Dawn was very helpful and encouraging. The report was thoughtful and constructive. It gave me a lot to think about and also the motivation to keeping working on this story. Thank you so much Dawn!

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

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    lindseylou_18

    US

    United States

    5

    Extremely positive experience! She delivered everything in a timely manner and offered some very helpful and in-depth suggestions for my short story. If you have a short story that you'd like a second opinion on, I definitely recommend her services as her feedback was honest, professional, and insightful. 10/10 :)

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

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    kileyroseca

    US

    United States

    5

    Really great feedback on the beta reading. Very happy with my choice! Very detailed and gave me something to think about. Helped me make my children's book even better!

    Helpful?
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    No
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    gweniethkell496

    US

    United States

    5

    I appreciated the professionalism, quick turnaround time, and honest feedback. Much effort was put into the report and the details allowed me to rethink some areas that needed attention. I would definitely recommend her.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    actionauthorben

    CA

    Canada

    5

    very good. She was informative and gave me more examples of what I could change.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

14 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(14)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    5
  • Service as described
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • L
    image-docs

    lidiyav859

    US

    United States

    5

    Dawn was very helpful and encouraging. The report was thoughtful and constructive. It gave me a lot to think about and also the motivation to keeping working on this story. Thank you so much Dawn!

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lindseylou_18

    US

    United States

    5

    Extremely positive experience! She delivered everything in a timely manner and offered some very helpful and in-depth suggestions for my short story. If you have a short story that you'd like a second opinion on, I definitely recommend her services as her feedback was honest, professional, and insightful. 10/10 :)

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    kileyroseca

    US

    United States

    5

    Really great feedback on the beta reading. Very happy with my choice! Very detailed and gave me something to think about. Helped me make my children's book even better!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G
    image-docs

    gweniethkell496

    US

    United States

    5

    I appreciated the professionalism, quick turnaround time, and honest feedback. Much effort was put into the report and the details allowed me to rethink some areas that needed attention. I would definitely recommend her.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    actionauthorben

    CA

    Canada

    5

    very good. She was informative and gave me more examples of what I could change.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No