I will beta read your novel and send honest rewiev

5.0
5.0

Serbia

I speak English, Serbian

32 orders completed

I do fantasy maps for your games, writings, board games, books... I write jokes and fuuny stuff... Check all my gigs and you will definately find something for you!

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

As your beta reader, I will give you an honest readers perspective and provide you with a report and in-line commentary in your Word manuscript that offers encouragement and suggestions on what works and what can be improved. I do not work in Google Docs. Price is 1$ per 1000 words.


What I pay the most attention to as a reader:

  • Plot
  • Characterization
  • Realistic dialogue
  • Pacing
  • Sensory Details
  • Let you know what made me cry, laugh, cringe, wince, or want to put the book down.



Additional issues that may be addressed in my review:

  • Opening
  • Hooks and prompts
  • Worldbuilding and setting
  • Tension/ Conflict
  • Pacing and repetition
  • Glaring errors
  • Continuity and inconsistencies
  • Overall readability and flow
  • Point of view switches (head-hopping)
  • Too much telling instead of showing
  • Repetitions and redundancies
  • I will not specifically hunt for grammatical or spelling error but I will flag anything that jumps out at me.
  • General note on recurring grammar and punctuation issues

This gig is for all kind novels. 

Looking forward to working with you!

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

5 reviews for this Gig
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    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    Thanks for the feedback! Very useful for my next editing pass.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    mountain_eagle gave me excellent feedback, includig reader reactions, thoughts about what works well and what can be improved, and some very creative ideas. I am very happy with his work, and I plan to work with him on my future books as well.

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    mountain_eagle gave me excellent feedback for my epic fantasy novel. He included both strengths and areas for improvement, and highlighted examples throughout the book. I will use his suggestions to improve the book, and I plan to work with him on my next book as well.

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    Thanks for the comments! Much appreciated.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    michaelan

    RS

    Serbia

    5

    Perfect delivery by the Seller. Insightful and well balanced feedback.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

5 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    Thanks for the feedback! Very useful for my next editing pass.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    mountain_eagle gave me excellent feedback, includig reader reactions, thoughts about what works well and what can be improved, and some very creative ideas. I am very happy with his work, and I plan to work with him on my future books as well.

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    mountain_eagle gave me excellent feedback for my epic fantasy novel. He included both strengths and areas for improvement, and highlighted examples throughout the book. I will use his suggestions to improve the book, and I plan to work with him on my next book as well.

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bradtowers

    ES

    Spain

    5

    Thanks for the comments! Much appreciated.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    michaelan

    RS

    Serbia

    5

    Perfect delivery by the Seller. Insightful and well balanced feedback.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No