I will beta read your fiction manuscript, give honest feedback
Avid Beta Reader, and Book Editor
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Tired of getting "I loved it!" from friends and family and still not knowing if your book actually works?
That kind of feedback feels nice, but it doesn't tell you if your pacing drags, if readers connect with your characters, or if your ending really lands. And once your book is out, that's exactly the feedback that shows up in your reviews instead.
I'll read your manuscript the way your target reader will, then send you a clear, structured report covering:
- Plot and pacing
- Character connection and arcs
- Reader engagement (where they'll get bored, confused, or hooked)
- Overall ending impact
Genres I work with: Fantasy, Fiction, Romantasy, Thriller, Mystery, Romance, Contemporary Fiction
Why work with me:
- Your manuscript stays 100% confidential (NDA available on request)
- ️Feedback that's honest and specific, never harsh or discouraging
- I read as a genre fan first, so my notes actually match what your readers expect
Let's get your manuscript ready to publish with confidence, not guesswork.
Message me before ordering if you want to talk through your project first!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
6 reviews for this Gig
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mayo554

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThe feedback I received was first class. Descriptive in each chapter breakdown of both plot, characters and readability with strengths and weaknesses highlighted. Very positive feedback and also grounded. Very happy to work with Boluwaji again in future projects. Highly recommended. Ryan
$50
Price
1 day
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mayo554

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThe work was excellent and very informative about any discrepancies in the manuscript. I ha e enjoyed working with Boluwaji. During my draft manuscript process. Highly recommended.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?J jerrykendrabras

South Africa
Great experience with the seller.
$50
Price
6 days
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Helpful?A alex804

United States
Ongoing collaborationVery good very professional will work with him again.
$50-$100
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2 days
Duration
Helpful?A alex804

United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent experience from start to finish. The feedback was not only thorough but also actionable—every suggestion had a clear purpose and helped elevate the story. They showed a strong understanding of structure, character development, and pacing. This wasn’t surface-level critique—it was thoughtful,...
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
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6 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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mayo554

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThe feedback I received was first class. Descriptive in each chapter breakdown of both plot, characters and readability with strengths and weaknesses highlighted. Very positive feedback and also grounded. Very happy to work with Boluwaji again in future projects. Highly recommended. Ryan
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?M 
mayo554

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThe work was excellent and very informative about any discrepancies in the manuscript. I ha e enjoyed working with Boluwaji. During my draft manuscript process. Highly recommended.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?J jerrykendrabras

South Africa
Great experience with the seller.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?A alex804

United States
Ongoing collaborationVery good very professional will work with him again.
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?A alex804

United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent experience from start to finish. The feedback was not only thorough but also actionable—every suggestion had a clear purpose and helped elevate the story. They showed a strong understanding of structure, character development, and pacing. This wasn’t surface-level critique—it was thoughtful,...
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?

