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I will developmental editing for your book structure, plot, characters, and pacing
Book Editor, Stronger Stories, Authentic Voices
Every manuscript has a heartbeat. I help authors make sure readers can feel it.
I’m Naomi, a book editor focused on children’s books, fiction and novels, Christian books, developmental editing, and ma...
About this Gig
Your manuscript has potentialbut weak pacing, plot gaps, unclear character motives, or an uneven structure can stop readers from connecting with your story.
When these problems remain unresolved, even strong writing can feel confusing, slow, or unfinished. You may spend months revising without knowing what to fix first. My developmental editing service gives you clear, practical direction. As your manuscript editor, I will evaluate your:
- Plot, structure, and story arc
- Character development and motivation
- Pacing, conflict, tension, and continuity
- Chapter flow and scene effectiveness
- Story strengths and priority improvements
You will receive thoughtful manuscript comments, an editorial report, and a prioritized revision roadmap based on your selected package. You will understand what works, what needs attention, and how to strengthen it without losing your unique author voice. Ready to build a stronger, more compelling story? Place your order today, or message me with your genre, word count, and sample for a custom offer.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What does your developmental editing service cover?
I evaluate your plot, structure, pacing, character development, conflict, story logic, chapter flow, and overall reader experience. Depending on your package, you will receive manuscript comments, an editorial report, and a prioritized revision
Will you rewrite or change my story?
No. I will not replace your ideas or erase your author voice. I identify weaknesses, explain why they affect the story, and recommend practical improvements. You remain in complete control of every creative decision.
Does developmental editing include proofreading and grammar correction?
Developmental editing focuses on the larger elements of your manuscript rather than correcting every sentence. Full line editing, copyediting, proofreading, formatting, and extensive rewriting are not included.
Can you developmentally edit my complete manuscript?
Yes. For manuscripts exceeding the listed package word count, message me before ordering. Send your genre, total word count, preferred deadline, and a sample chapter, and I will prepare a custom offer based on the manuscript’s scope.
