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Hello,

I'm Naomi, a beta reader and story critic for novels, memoirs, and fanfiction.

I provide honest, detailed feedback to help authors strengthen their novels, memoirs, fanfiction, devotionals, and other manuscripts. Whether you need a beta read, critique, or story evaluation, I focus on plot, pacing, character development, structure, and emotional impact helping your story resonate with readers.

Every manuscript is handled thoughtfully, with constructive insights and personalized notes.

I'll tell you in my feedback,

If your story captures my attention from the first page,

where there is any slow, boring, or lagging sections,

If any parts feels confusing or underdeveloped,

If the level of description is too much or too little anywhere,

If the story contains overly technical language,

if the plot is predictable or engaging,

if the ending is satisfying and believable,

If the story maintains strong tension and stakes,

if the internal conflict of the main characters is clear,

If the opening chapters feels like info-dumping,

If the dialogue feels natural and realistic.

My goal: To help you identify the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript

Contact me now!