I will improve and polish dialogue for your novel or screenplay

United States

I speak English, French

Manuscript reviewer

I am Naomi, a Professional beta reader and Linguistics graduate specialising in romance, fantasy, horror, thriller, and sensitivity reading. I provide detailed manuscript feedback focused on pacing, ...
About this Gig

Does your dialogue sound stiff, repetitive, unrealistic, or out of character? Strong dialogue is what brings stories to life, reveals personality, and keeps readers engaged from beginning to end.

I will professionally review and polish the dialogue in your novel, screenplay, short story, or manuscript to create natural, engaging, and character-driven conversations that feel authentic and memorable.

My service includes:

  • Improving dialogue flow and readability
  • Strengthening character voice and consistency
  • Removing awkward or repetitive exchanges
  • Enhancing pacing and conversational rhythm
  • Making conversations more realistic and engaging
  • Identifying dialogue that feels forced or unnecessary
  • Ensuring characters sound distinct and believable

I work with fiction, romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, science fiction, YA, literary fiction, memoirs, and screenplays.

You'll receive edited dialogue with tracked changes, actionable feedback, character voice insights, and recommendations to improve reader engagement. Whether you're preparing for self-publishing, agent submissions, or production, I'll help your characters sound authentic and unforgettable.

Please contact me before placing Order!

Language:

Dutch

English

Content Type:

Articles/ blogs

Book

Thesis

Genre:

Business management

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Delivery style preference

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