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I will do premium developmental edit for fantasy novel, elevate romance story structure
About this Gig
I've read the slush pile. I've sat in editorial meetings. I've written the genres myself. Your fantasy or romance manuscript? I know exactly what's missing.
N. Ray here, A trained editor, MFA graduate, former publishing house editor turned freelance developmental editor. I didn't stumble into this work. I lived inside the industry, watched manuscripts get rejected for fixable reasons, and decided to be the person who catches those problems before they reach an agent's desk.
What I Offer:
- Full developmental edit for fantasy novels & romance stories
- Plot structure, story arc & pacing overhaul
- Character motivation, emotional arc & relationship tension analysis
- World-building consistency (fantasy) & romantic beats mapping
- Scene-level feedback what lands, what doesn't, and why
- Detailed feedback + inline annotated manuscript
Scope & Deliverables:
Developmental edit focused on big-picture structure or line edits and proofreading. You'll receive a detailed editorial letter and annotated manuscript ready for revision.
Best for: First drafts, pre-submission manuscripts & stories ready for serious structural elevation
Bring me your messy draft. I'll help you make it undeniable
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FAQ
My story feels flat, but I can't figure out why. Can you help?
That's exactly what developmental editing is for. I identify the underlying issues affecting pacing, tension, character investment, plot progression, and emotional impact so your book can align with your audience and publishing goals.
What will I receive at the end of the project?
You'll receive the edited manuscript, a separate file with tracked changes and a detailed editorial feedback.
Can you identify plot holes and weak story structure?
Yes. I analyze story logic, cause-and-effect relationships, plot consistency, pacing, character motivations, and narrative cohesion to uncover issues that may weaken the reader experience.
What is included in your developmental editing service?
I provide in-depth feedback on story structure, plot, pacing, character development, worldbuilding, conflict, stakes, romance progression, scene effectiveness, and overall reader engagement. My goal is to help you create a stronger, more compelling manuscript before line editing or proofreading.
Can you help improve my romance arc?
Yes. Whether you're writing contemporary, historical, paranormal, or fantasy romance, I'll assess character chemistry, emotional tension, relationship progression, conflict, payoff, and reader satisfaction to help create a more engaging love story.
Do you edit other genres?
Yes! However, you can contact me first to discuss your genre before placing an order
