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I will be your developmental editor for ya and na contemporary romance novel
Beta Reader And Developmental Editor for NA and YA Fiction story Writers
Hello, I’m Nathaniel.
Stories stay with readers because of how they make them feel. As a beta reader for NA and YA fiction writers, I focus on the moments that keep readers connected from the first c...
About this Gig
Your story deserves to be told and told well.
You gave your story your time, your emotions, and pieces of yourself. But deep down, you can feel it; something is not connecting the way it should. Maybe the story loses energy in certain places, or the emotional moments fail to connect with readers fully.
I'm a developmental editor specializing in New Adult (NA) and Young Adult (YA) contemporary and romance fiction. I don't just tell you what isn't working, I show you why and give you a clear, actionable roadmap to fix it.
What I look at:
- Plot structure & story arc
- Character development & motivation
- Pacing & scene-by-scene flow
- Emotional resonance & reader experience
- Point of view & narrative voice
- Romance arc & relationship dynamics
- Theme & subtext
Why work with me?
You will receive honest feedback, clear guidance, and practical suggestions designed to help your manuscript grow into the strongest version of itself.
Who this is for:
- Writers finishing their first or second draft
- Authors who feel stuck and need a fresh set of eyes
- Storytellers who want to level up before querying agents or self-publishing
Check my packages or message me for the best fit for your manuscript.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between developmental editing and proofreading?
Developmental editing looks at the big picture: your plot, characters, pacing, and emotional arc. It's about making your story stronger. Proofreading focuses on grammar and spelling. I recommend developmental editing before any line editing
Do I need a complete manuscript to order?
For the Basic package, a partial manuscript (minimum 10,000 words) is fine. For Standard and Premium, I recommend a complete or near-complete draft so the feedback covers your full story arc.
How do you deliver the feedback?
You'll receive a detailed editorial letter as a PDF, plus an annotated version of your manuscript with inline comments (Standard & Premium).
Can I message you before ordering?
Absolutely, I encourage it! Every manuscript is unique, and I want to make sure we're a great fit before you invest. Drop me a message and tell me about your story!
