I will be your expert beta reader and constructive critic

Abenzoar N

France

I speak English, French

Professional Beta Reader Literary Critic

I am a self-taught, prolific writer and translator with over 3–4 years of experience and 5,800 publications. I specialize in Fantasy, Thriller, and Action genres, providing deep, constructive beta rea...
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About this Gig

Looking for honest, constructive feedback to elevate your manuscript?


As a prolific writer/translator with 5,800+ published chapters and millions of views on Royal Road & Webnovel, I deeply analyze narrative structures, pacing, and genre tropes. I know what keeps readers hooked.


MY GENRE EXPERTISE:

️ Fantasy (world-building, magic systems)

️ Thrillers (pacing, tension, twists)

️ Action & Adventure (stakes, momentum)

*(No Romance/Literary Fiction - I want to ensure genre-specific expertise)*


WHAT YOU GET:

Comprehensive Editorial Letter (plot, characters, pacing, world-building)

In-text comments highlighting strengths & weaknesses

Honest, actionable advice to help you progress


WHAT I DON'T DO:

I'm a beta reader, NOT a proofreader. No grammar/spelling fixes. My focus is 100% on story, plot, and reader experience.


BILINGUAL: English & French manuscripts welcome.


Let's make your story the best it can be! Message me before ordering to discuss your project.

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Language:

English

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French

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