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I will beta read your thriller, science fiction, and fantasy
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Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
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What people loved about this freelancer
sight_scrbe
United States
Richard was professional, responsive, and easy to work with throughout the project. He completed the beta read on schedule and provided detailed inline comments...
annielettemay
United States
This is my second time working with Richard O and again, he delivers. His first set of comments and report inspired me to add another layer to the short story. Would recommend 10/10
annielettemay
United States
Richard provided a very thorough review of my storyline. His reader critiques are useful. You can see where there may be areas lacking clarity for readers,...
matt2550
United States
Richard is a straight up individual and has no qualms sharing his critique of your work filtered through experience, wisdom, and intelligence. You get a real...
About this Gig
Hi, I'm Richard. I will beta read your manuscript thoughtfully and provide honest and constructive feedback with 100% human insight.
You will receive:
- Detailed inline comments directly in your manuscript
- Comprehensive book report with actionable insights
- Respectful critique on what's working, what isn't, and suggestions to fix issues
Genres I love to beta read:
- Thriller
- Science Fiction
- Fantasy
- Horror
- Military Fiction
- Post-apocalyptic
- Dystopian
- Action/Adventure
- Afrofuturism
My critique will focus on the story elements:
- Character
- Central conflict
- Character motivation
- Characterization
- Character development & likability
- Setting
- Point of view
- Plot
- Climax & resolution
- Whatever stands out
- Suggestions for improvement
Unique value I bring:
- (Former soldier) Small unit tactics
- Special forces operations
- Authentic use of military equipment
- I can be your sensitivity reader on the African experience
- With a foundation in sociology, I will help ground your story in believable social dynamics
Let me help take your story to the next level with actionable feedback. Ready to strengthen your manuscript? Message me with your word count, genre, and timeline, or place your order now!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
Do you beta read books with dark themes?
Yes, I do.
Will you read books longer than 110,000 words?
Yes, I will beta read books longer than 110,000 words. Please send me a message to find out the terms.
Do you beta read experimentalist novels?
I have a wide taste in reading. If you need a fresh pair of eyes on your experimentalist novel, send me a message.
Do you beta read books that contain steamy scenes?
Yes.
Do you read movie scripts?
Yes.
Are you interested in other projects that are not writing-related?
Yes, of course. Send me a message, and we can discuss the details.
Do you read stories with LGBT content?
Yes. Feel free to send your story to me.
How long does it take you to beta read a manuscript?
I have an average turnaround of 10,000 words/day. However, I often work faster, depending on the situation.
Do you have a nondisclosure agreement form?
I would be very happy to sign it if you can provide one with your manuscript.
What do you do with your copy of the manuscript after you beta read it?
I use top-grade security on my computers, and I delete manuscripts after 30 days.
Reviews
598 reviews for this Gig
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S sight_scrbe
United States
Richard was professional, responsive, and easy to work with throughout the project. He completed the beta read on schedule and provided detailed inline comments that showed he was actively engaged with the manuscript. His feedback offered valuable insight into reader experience, pacing, character engagement,...
$100-$200
Price
11 days
Duration
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Helpful?L larry_gross
United States
There were certain elements on the review that felt very personal to the reader. He didn’t like made up names. Most sci-fi of this style (large world, space opera) use made up names. He felt there were too many characters… again, this is very common for this type of book. It also felt he didn’t fully...
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?A 
annielettemay
Repeat Client
United States
This is my second time working with Richard O and again, he delivers. His first set of comments and report inspired me to add another layer to the short story. Would recommend 10/10
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?A annielettemay
Repeat Client
United States
Richard provided a very thorough review of my storyline. His reader critiques are useful. You can see where there may be areas lacking clarity for readers, which is invaluable as a writer! He also included line comments to implement in the next draft. He is also a great resource and guide for new writers....
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?M matt2550
United States
Richard is a straight up individual and has no qualms sharing his critique of your work filtered through experience, wisdom, and intelligence. You get a real sense that the feedback he gives is to honestly help you improve and he wants you to succeed. He did A LOT of work going over my manuscript and...
$100-$200
Price
11 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
598 reviews for this Gig
| (578) | ||
| (18) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (1) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
S sight_scrbe
United States
Richard was professional, responsive, and easy to work with throughout the project. He completed the beta read on schedule and provided detailed inline comments that showed he was actively engaged with the manuscript. His feedback offered valuable insight into reader experience, pacing, character engagement,...
$100-$200
Price
11 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?L larry_gross
United States
There were certain elements on the review that felt very personal to the reader. He didn’t like made up names. Most sci-fi of this style (large world, space opera) use made up names. He felt there were too many characters… again, this is very common for this type of book. It also felt he didn’t fully...
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?A annielettemay
Repeat Client
United States
This is my second time working with Richard O and again, he delivers. His first set of comments and report inspired me to add another layer to the short story. Would recommend 10/10
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?A annielettemay
Repeat Client
United States
Richard provided a very thorough review of my storyline. His reader critiques are useful. You can see where there may be areas lacking clarity for readers, which is invaluable as a writer! He also included line comments to implement in the next draft. He is also a great resource and guide for new writers....
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?M matt2550
United States
Richard is a straight up individual and has no qualms sharing his critique of your work filtered through experience, wisdom, and intelligence. You get a real sense that the feedback he gives is to honestly help you improve and he wants you to succeed. He did A LOT of work going over my manuscript and...
$100-$200
Price
11 days
Duration
O Seller's Response
Helpful?
