I will beta read your thriller, science fiction, and fantasy

4.9
4.9

Nigeria

I speak Yoruba, English

809 orders completed

Gig Summary

Beta Reader

I'm Richard, and I have been a beta reader since 2018. I'm here to provide actionable feedback on science fiction, thriller, fantasy, or horror. I also beta read romance, dystopian, post-apocalyptic ...

Buyers keep returning

Richard O has an exceptional number of repeat buyers

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

Highly Responsive

Known for exceptionally quick replies

What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

Hi, I'm Richard. I will beta read your manuscript thoughtfully and provide honest and constructive feedback with 100% human insight.


You will receive:

  • Detailed inline comments directly in your manuscript
  • Comprehensive book report with actionable insights
  • Respectful critique on what's working, what isn't, and suggestions to fix issues


Genres I love to beta read:

  • Thriller
  • Science Fiction
  • Fantasy
  • Horror
  • Military Fiction
  • Post-apocalyptic
  • Dystopian
  • Action/Adventure
  • Afrofuturism


My critique will focus on the story elements:

  • Character
  • Central conflict
  • Character motivation
  • Characterization
  • Character development & likability
  • Setting
  • Point of view
  • Plot
  • Climax & resolution
  • Whatever stands out
  • Suggestions for improvement


Unique value I bring:

  • (Former soldier) Small unit tactics
  • Special forces operations
  • Authentic use of military equipment
  • I can be your sensitivity reader on the African experience
  • With a foundation in sociology, I will help ground your story in believable social dynamics


Let me help take your story to the next level with actionable feedback. Ready to strengthen your manuscript? Message me with your word count, genre, and timeline, or place your order now!

Genre:

Action

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Horror/ thriller

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Memoir/ biography

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Mystery

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

606 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(586)
(18)
(1)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    anneetta

    CH

    Switzerland

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    It's my second time working with Richard and the quality of his work is always top tier. He has a high level of attention to details and is able to spot inconsistencies. In a world of AI, choose Richard. He makes notes in the manuscript and also provide a report. Thanks again Richard!

    $100-$200

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
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    annielettemay

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This is my second time working with Richard O and again, he delivers. His first set of comments and report inspired me to add another layer to the short story. Would recommend 10/10

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
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    tapuziel

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Richard was excellent. He went beyond what was expected, and proactively reach out to ask question and offered concrete suggestions on what could be done to improve my story, and seemed genuinely eager to help me elevate my novel to the next level.

    $100-$200

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    matt2550

    US

    United States

    5

    Richard is a straight up individual and has no qualms sharing his critique of your work filtered through experience, wisdom, and intelligence. You get a real sense that the feedback he gives is to honestly help you improve and he wants you to succeed. He did A LOT of work going over my manuscript and...

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cliffhorowitz

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Richard provided great and balanced feedback, pointing out the things that worked as well as those that didn't. With the latter, he was careful to always say why, which helped to understand and evaluate his critique, as well as pointing to potential solutions. His beta read was extremely helpful to moving my manuscript to the next phase.

    $200-$400

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

606 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(586)
(18)
(1)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    anneetta

    CH

    Switzerland

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    It's my second time working with Richard and the quality of his work is always top tier. He has a high level of attention to details and is able to spot inconsistencies. In a world of AI, choose Richard. He makes notes in the manuscript and also provide a report. Thanks again Richard!

    $100-$200

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    annielettemay

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This is my second time working with Richard O and again, he delivers. His first set of comments and report inspired me to add another layer to the short story. Would recommend 10/10

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    tapuziel

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Richard was excellent. He went beyond what was expected, and proactively reach out to ask question and offered concrete suggestions on what could be done to improve my story, and seemed genuinely eager to help me elevate my novel to the next level.

    $100-$200

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    matt2550

    US

    United States

    5

    Richard is a straight up individual and has no qualms sharing his critique of your work filtered through experience, wisdom, and intelligence. You get a real sense that the feedback he gives is to honestly help you improve and he wants you to succeed. He did A LOT of work going over my manuscript and...

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cliffhorowitz

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Richard provided great and balanced feedback, pointing out the things that worked as well as those that didn't. With the latter, he was careful to always say why, which helped to understand and evaluate his critique, as well as pointing to potential solutions. His beta read was extremely helpful to moving my manuscript to the next phase.

    $200-$400

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No