I will give professional script feedback and story development notes
WriterDirector
About this Gig
I am a writer/director with an MA in Filmmaking from the London Film School. I've written and directed multiple short films, including award-winning work, and I specialise in story development.
I will provide clear, structured feedback on your script or idea, focusing on:
- Story structure
- Character development
- Dialogue
- Pacing and clarity
You will receive:
- Written notes with actionable suggestions
- Honest, constructive feedback
- Ideas to strengthen your story
Whether you're a beginner or experienced, I'll help you take your script to the next level.
NOTE: Page count is a guideline and may vary based on script length and complexity.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What kind of scripts do you review?
Short films, features, TV pilots, YouTube scripts, and other narrative projects.
What feedback do you provide?
Structure, characters, dialogue, pacing, and overall story clarity with actionable suggestions.
What will I receive?
1–5 pages of clear written notes depending on the package.
Do you rewrite scripts?
No, this service focuses on feedback and development, not full rewrites.
How do revisions work?
Revisions cover clarification and adjustments, not new feedback for a completely different script.

