I will critique your query and synopsis for literary agent submissions
About this Gig
Ready to submit your book to literary agents but unsure if your query letter and synopsis are strong enough?
Before you hit send, get a professional query letter critique and synopsis critique designed specifically for literary agent submissions.
I will carefully review your materials and provide clear, practical feedback on:
- Query letter structure, clarity & flow
- Opening hook and book premise
- Plot, characters & story presentation
- Synopsis structure and readability
- Grammar, wording & sentence-level issues
- Weak or confusing sections that may hurt your pitch
- Overall presentation for literary agent submissions
Youll receive actionable feedback showing you what works, what needs improvement, and how you can strengthen your submission before querying agents.
Whether youre preparing your first query letter, revising after feedback, or simply want a fresh professional perspective, this service can help you submit with greater confidence.
Please note: The listed package includes a query letter of up to 1 page and a synopsis of up to 1,000 words. Longer documents may require an additional fee.
Ready to improve your query before sending it to literary agents? Place your order and lets get st
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FAQ
What do you need from me to get started?
Please send your query letter and/or synopsis in an editable format such as Word or Google Docs. If possible, also provide your book’s genre and target audience so I can evaluate the submission in the right context.
Do you critique both the query letter and synopsis?
Yes. I can review your query letter, synopsis, or both, depending on the package you choose. Each document will be evaluated for clarity, structure, writing quality, and suitability for literary agent submissions.
What does your query letter critique include?
I review your opening hook, book premise, structure, clarity, positioning, wording, flow, grammar, and overall pitch. I’ll identify areas that may be confusing or weakening your submission and provide practical feedback.
What does the synopsis critique include?
I’ll evaluate the synopsis for structure, plot clarity, pacing, character presentation, readability, and overall effectiveness. I’ll also point out sections that could be clearer or more concise.
Will you rewrite my query letter or synopsis?
This gig is primarily a professional critique and feedback service, not a complete rewriting service. I can provide suggestions and recommended changes, while full rewriting or extensive editing can be discussed as an additional service.
How long can my query letter and synopsis be?
The standard package covers a query letter of up to 1 page and a synopsis of up to 1,000 words. If your documents exceed these limits, please contact me before ordering so we can discuss the additional work required.
Can you critique my submission if I have already received feedback from agents?
Absolutely. If you’ve received feedback from beta readers, editors, or agents, you can include it with your order. I can provide an additional perspective and help you identify areas that may need further improvement.
Will your critique guarantee that a literary agent will accept my book?
No. Literary agents consider many factors when deciding whether to request or represent a manuscript. My service provides professional, constructive feedback to help strengthen your query and synopsis before you submit them to literary agents.

