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I will provide script coverage feedback notes analysis for TV pilot film screenplay
Scriptwriting and editing for stories that need structure
Hi, I'm Olivia. I write and edit scripts for comics, manga, webtoons, graphic novels, screenplays, TV scripts, feature films, and stage plays. I also offer script coverage, feedback, analysis, and pol...
About this Gig
Is your script getting rejected and you don't know why? Weak structure, plot holes, flat characters, slow pacing, or dialogue that misses the mark, these are the reasons scripts get passed over by agents, producers, and contests.
I provide professional script coverage and screenplay analysis for TV pilots, feature films, and screenplays. This screenplay evaluation identifies exactly what's holding your story back and how to fix it, the same coverage studios and managers use to decide what gets a yes.
You'll receive:
- Full script coverage with logline, synopsis & verdict
- Scene-by-scene screenplay notes
- Structure, pacing & plot consistency review
- Character & dialogue analysis
- Strengths, weaknesses & clear improvement recommendations
- TV pilot feedback / feature film screenplay coverage
Why work with me:
- Honest, detailed script analysis, not vague praise
- Actionable, industry-style feedback
- Full confidentiality on every project
- Fast communication, close attention to detail
Ready to know what's really working in your script? Message me with questions, or order now and let's get it ready for the industry.
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English
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What's included in your script coverage?
You'll get a full breakdown covering logline, synopsis, structure, pacing, character development, dialogue, plot consistency, and an overall verdict (Pass, Consider, or Recommend), the same format used in professional script evaluation.
Do you cover TV pilots as well as feature films?
Yes. I provide TV pilot feedback and TV pilot analysis alongside coverage for feature film screenplays and short scripts.
Is my script kept confidential?
Yes, always. Every script I read is treated as fully confidential. Your work stays yours.
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Olivia's feedback was clear, honest, and incredibly helpful. She pointed out strengths I hadn't noticed and highlighted areas that needed improvement in a constructive way.I'm very happy with the coverage and would gladly work with her again.
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Olivia's feedback was clear, honest, and incredibly helpful. She pointed out strengths I hadn't noticed and highlighted areas that needed improvement in a constructive way.I'm very happy with the coverage and would gladly work with her again.
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6 days
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