I will edit medical school personal statements
Second year resident at Boston University Medical Center
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
ryanculin

United States
Olivia reviewed all of my activities and my personal statement, not only proofreading for grammar and inconsistencies, but also giving feedback on the overall...
jin_inii

South Korea
Dr. Soudry went above and beyond! She provided valuable, detailed feedback that helped me recognize many weak points in my personal statement. Her comments...
arnav_ve

United States
Dr. Soudry did a great job with reviews on my application, she mentioned areas I could make clearer or more detailed, cut out unneeded content and explained...
calex_t

United States
Olivia exceeded every expectation. She brought clarity, structure, and insight to my personal statement, TMDSAS essays, and Activities section. Her feedback...
emilytran072

United States
Thank you so much Olivia!! Not only did she provide fantastic feedback and I know how to improve and which direction to take my essay in, she also added nice...
About this Gig
I know firsthand how challenging the medical school application process can be. I also know how helpful it is to have someone who not only understands the process, but knows how to help you tell your story in a way that stands out.
After going through the application process myself, completing medical school, and now in residency, I have a clear understanding of what admissions committees are really looking for.
Ill help you write a personal statement that goes far beyond "I want to become a doctor to help people." Together, we'll make sure your unique experiences are framed in a way that highlights your strengths, communicates your potential, and allows your personality to shine through.
I've helped hundreds applicants strengthen their personal statements, and there's nothing more rewarding than getting that excited "thank you" message when my clients are accepted at their top schools. I'd love to help you be next.
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
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CV
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Essay
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FAQ
What do you focus on when editing?
I will provide detailed feedback on both structure and content, and make sure that your experiences are presented in a way that will "wow" medical schools, and that your personality shines through in your essay. I, of course, will fix any grammatical or syntax errors in your personal statement too.
What if I decide I want a revision after the first round of editing?
Just message me! I will be happy to create a custom package for you to take a second (or third!) look.
Can I decide to add on the activities section later?
Definitely! If you aren't sure if you want just your personal statement edited or if you want to have your activities edited later, just let me know. We can always work out custom packages to fit your needs.
Can you write my personal statement from scratch?
No. Writing your personal statement from scratch is against AAMC/ERAS policy, and it would not be YOUR "personal" statement. Medical schools want to know about YOU! :) That being said, I have a gig to help you brainstorm and outline your personal statement to make the writing process a breeze.
What if I have no idea where to start in terms of writing a personal statement?
I have a gig for that! Writing a personal statement is so tough, but I have a foolproof way to outline and write your personal statement in no time. Click on my profile to find the brainstorming gig, or copy and paste this link into your browser: https://www.fiverr.com/share/WDL6XQ
Do you only edit medical school personal statements?
Nope! I have experience editing personal statements for college, dental school, physical therapy school, residency, and more. Feel free to message me if you have any questions!
Do you edit secondary applications as well?
Absolutely. Secondaries are arguably the most important part of your written application, because medical schools want to know if you would be a good fit for their program. Click on my profile to find the secondaries gig, or copy and paste this link: https://www.fiverr.com/share/eLpoAm
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R ryanculin

United States
Olivia reviewed all of my activities and my personal statement, not only proofreading for grammar and inconsistencies, but also giving feedback on the overall content and how the story of my application blended together as a whole. She provided great insight on where certain narratives belonged, where...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?J jin_inii

South Korea
Dr. Soudry went above and beyond! She provided valuable, detailed feedback that helped me recognize many weak points in my personal statement. Her comments were thoughtful and insightful, and they really helped me strengthen my narrative. I would highly recommend Dr. Soudry to anyone considering an editing service.
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
O 
Seller's Response
Helpful?A arnav_ve

United States
Dr. Soudry did a great job with reviews on my application, she mentioned areas I could make clearer or more detailed, cut out unneeded content and explained why it was cut, and gave a lot of suggestions on what to put in its place. This was one of the most detailed reviews I got. I have a fast timeline...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C calex_t

United States
Olivia exceeded every expectation. She brought clarity, structure, and insight to my personal statement, TMDSAS essays, and Activities section. Her feedback consistently made my writing stronger without ever losing my voice. She was thoughtful, responsive, and genuinely invested in helping me tell my...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?E emilytran072

United States
Thank you so much Olivia!! Not only did she provide fantastic feedback and I know how to improve and which direction to take my essay in, she also added nice comments in there that were sweet and helped me stay motivated to continue, especially in this stressful time. She delivered perfectly on time as well.
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
89 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
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R ryanculin

United States
Olivia reviewed all of my activities and my personal statement, not only proofreading for grammar and inconsistencies, but also giving feedback on the overall content and how the story of my application blended together as a whole. She provided great insight on where certain narratives belonged, where...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
O 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J jin_inii

South Korea
Dr. Soudry went above and beyond! She provided valuable, detailed feedback that helped me recognize many weak points in my personal statement. Her comments were thoughtful and insightful, and they really helped me strengthen my narrative. I would highly recommend Dr. Soudry to anyone considering an editing service.
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
O 
Seller's Response
Helpful?A arnav_ve

United States
Dr. Soudry did a great job with reviews on my application, she mentioned areas I could make clearer or more detailed, cut out unneeded content and explained why it was cut, and gave a lot of suggestions on what to put in its place. This was one of the most detailed reviews I got. I have a fast timeline...
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C calex_t

United States
Olivia exceeded every expectation. She brought clarity, structure, and insight to my personal statement, TMDSAS essays, and Activities section. Her feedback consistently made my writing stronger without ever losing my voice. She was thoughtful, responsive, and genuinely invested in helping me tell my...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?E emilytran072

United States
Thank you so much Olivia!! Not only did she provide fantastic feedback and I know how to improve and which direction to take my essay in, she also added nice comments in there that were sweet and helped me stay motivated to continue, especially in this stressful time. She delivered perfectly on time as well.
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
