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I will beta read your romantasy, romance and fantasy novel for detailed feedback
About this Gig
Most manuscripts have three problems authors can't see themselves, plot holes, pacing issues, and characters that don't land the way they should.
The reason is simple. When you've lived inside your story for months, you lose the ability to read it like a first-time reader would. You fill in the gaps automatically. You already know what every scene means.
A targeted beta read fixes that.
I'm Olivia. I read romance, romantasy, and fantasy manuscripts and tell you exactly where readers will disengage, what's working, and what needs attention before you spend money on editing or publishing.
- WHAT YOU GET
Detailed feedback on plot holes, pacing, character development, world-building, dialogue believability, and overall reader experience, all broken down chapter by chapter.
- WHO THIS IS FOR
Indie authors and self-publishers who want honest, specific feedback from a reader who understands romance tropes, fantasy world-building, and romantasy structure.
- HOW IT WORKS
Send your manuscript. I read it as your target reader would. You get a clear, actionable report, no vague comments, no filler.
Message me before ordering to confirm your word count and genre fit.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Romance
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Is this beta reading or editing?
Beta reading focuses on the reader experience, plot, pacing, characters, and story flow. It does not include grammar corrections or line editing. If you need editing, that is a separate service.
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in romance, romantasy, and fantasy fiction including subgenres like enemies-to-lovers, fated mates, epic fantasy, and fae romance.
What format do you need my manuscript in?
Google Docs or Word format works best. PDF is also accepted. Please ensure your document is clearly formatted with chapter breaks before sending.
How do you deliver the feedback?
You receive a detailed written report covering plot holes, pacing, character development, world-building, and dialogue, broken down chapter by chapter depending on your package.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
Yes. Your manuscript is read solely for feedback purposes and will never be shared, distributed, or discussed outside of our working relationship.
Can I send you just part of my manuscript?
Yes. Select the package that matches your word count, or message me first for a custom offer if your needs fall between packages.
How is this different from an editor?
An editor fixes your manuscript. A beta reader tells you how a real reader experiences it, what confuses them, what excites them, and where they would stop reading. Both serve different purposes.
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Portugal
Olivia’s feedback helped me more than I expected. She caught things I completely missed and made my story much clearer and stronger. I’m genuinely glad I worked with her.
Up to $50
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5 days
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
S sophiejamez
Repeat Client
Portugal
Olivia’s feedback helped me more than I expected. She caught things I completely missed and made my story much clearer and stronger. I’m genuinely glad I worked with her.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
