I will beta read your romance novel with honest reader feedback

United States

I speak English

Beta Reader, Honest Reader Based Feedback

Greetings, I'm Mariorty, a romance beta reader. I read your manuscript the way your audience will, then tell you honestly what works and what doesn't work in your story. Upon completion, you get a w...
About this Gig

Greetings,


Do you wish to have reader-based feedback on your manuscript before publishing? Have you finished your romance manuscript and want to know how it lands with a real reader before you query or publish? I will read your story the way your audience will, and then, tell you honestly what works and what pulls me out.


I'm Mariorty, a specialist in Beta Reading fictional Romance and Fantasy manuscripts. As a lover of fictional stories, I will ensure to deliver honest, reader-based feedback to help you develop a successful story.


I read: contemporary romance, romcom, paranormal/fantasy romance, romantic suspense, and romance with mystery or horror elements.


YOU WILL RECEIVE READER REPORT COVERING:

  1. Chemistry and Romantic Tension
  2. Pacing of the relationship arc
  3. Trope execution and reader expectations
  4. Character likability and motivation
  5. Emotional payoff and ending satisfaction
  6. Plot consistency and confusing moments


I guarantee 100% human beta reading, and ZERO AI-generated feedback. Your manuscript stays confidential. Message me with your genre, word count, and heat level so I can confirm fit before placing an order.


Best regards,

Mariorty

Genre:

Romance

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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