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I will beta read, critique, and deliver practicl feedback
Morocco
I speak Arabic, English, French
From Author's Desk to Listener's Ears I'm Your Bridge
Hi, I'm Othman 🎙️
BA English Lit + Published Novelist + Voice Actor. I do what 99% can't: I write stories AND give them voice.
🎙️ VOICE OVER: Audiobooks, YouTube, Ads, eLearning. Warm American acc...
About this Gig
Want beta feedback that actually makes your story better, not just "nice job"?
I read your manuscript like a real reader + editor, and give you honest, actionable notes to hook readers and fix whats broken.
**What youll get:**
Detailed reader report with engagement notes - where readers stay hooked or drop off
In-line comments on plot, pacing, character development + chemistry
Plot hole + weak scene identification with fix suggestions
Clear revision guidance you can use immediately
Language:
Arabic
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English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What’s the difference between beta reading and developmental editing?
Beta reading gives you reader reaction + what works/doesn’t. Developmental editing also suggests structural fixes. My Standard + Premium packages include both.
Do you check grammar and spelling?
I’ll flag major issues that break immersion, but I focus on story, plot, and character. For full proofreading/editing, check my other gig.
Can you read dark romance or spicy content?
Yes, I read all romance subgenres including dark, contemporary, romantasy. Message me first if content is extreme so I can confirm I’m the right fit.
