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I will beta read your ya novel and provide structured feedback
Your story, read with care and trust
I help Italian-language authors evaluate and improve their manuscripts through structured feedback, reader reports, and a clear 4-act story framework. I work especially with beginner, intermediate, an...
About this Gig
If you have written a young adult novel and need clear, thoughtful feedback before editing or publishing, this gig is for you.
I will beta read your YA manuscript and provide structured feedback focused on the readers experience.
My feedback can cover:
- clarity and readability
- pacing and rhythm
- character strength and consistency
- emotional engagement
- narrative tension
- overall effectiveness of the manuscript
This service is ideal for authors who want to understand how their story works from a skilled readers perspective before moving to the next stage.
Please note:
This is beta reading, not line editing, proofreading, or ghostwriting. I will not rewrite your manuscript or correct every sentence. Instead, I will help you see what is working, where the story loses strength, and how the manuscript may be perceived by readers.
I work best with:
- young adult fiction
-character driven YA
- emotionally driven contemporary YA
- indie and debut authors
You will receive honest, clear, and useful feedback designed to help you revise with more direction and confidence.
Language:
Italian
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is included in this beta reading service?
You will receive full-manuscript reading and structured feedback on clarity, pacing, characters, engagement, and overall effectiveness.
What genres do you work with?
I work best with young adult fiction, especially YA mystery, thriller, suspense, and emotionally driven contemporary stories.
Can I send a manuscript longer than your package limit?
Yes, if you contact me first or purchase the appropriate extra for additional word count.
Is this service suitable for first drafts?
Yes, if the manuscript is complete and readable. If it is still very rough, the feedback may focus more on structural clarity than refinement.
Can I book a follow-up consultation after receiving the report?
Yes. If you would like extra support after reading the report, I also offer a separate follow-up consultation to help you clarify revision priorities and next steps. This is an additional service and can be arranged through a custom offer on Fiverr.
