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I will do a developmental edit of your fiction book
Your story has power, and my job is to help you fully unlock it
Whether you need a fresh reader’s perspective or deeper developmental feedback, I’m here to support you.
With 7 years of beta reading and 2 years of developmental editing experience, I will give you ...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Ready to take your story to the next level?
Editing the project you've poured your time, effort, and heart into can feel daunting, but you don't have to do it alone. I'm here to help guide you through the process with clear, encouraging, and actionable feedback.
What you can expect from this gig:
- Proactive communication: Let's brainstorm and problem-solve together to find the best path for your story.
- Inline comments: I'll highlight what's working beautifully and suggest where your story can grow even stronger.
- Editorial letter: The heavy lifter! You'll receive a detailed overview of your manuscript's strengths and areas for improvement, as well as clear next steps to guide your revision process.
Your story deserves the best version of itself, and you deserve a collaborative partner to help you get there.
Let's bring your vision to life!
Please contact me before placing an order so we can ensure I have the time to dedicate fully to your manuscript and provide the best service possible!
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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drobnick
United States
Paula did an excellent job beta reading and reviewing my book. She was thorough, thoughtful, and clearly took the time to understand both the story and what I was trying to accomplish. Her feedback included many helpful suggestions for improvement, and she explained them in a way that was easy to understand...
$400-$600
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3 months
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teddyfarms
Dominica
Paula’s developmental edit was exceptional! Insightful, thorough, and transformative for my novel’s character arcs, structure, and overall cohesion. Her feedback went well beyond her already excellent beta reading, and in the future, I’d choose her developmental editing without hesitation. Highly recommend!
$200-$400
Price
3 months
Duration
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Helpful?G greg_fiction
United States
Working with Paula is always a wonderful and rewarding experience. Receiving her feedback is like participating in a personal writing workshop or boot camp. She always asks the most consequential questions to help guide the development. She provides the most comprehensive and insightful analysis of what...
$200-$400
Price
3 months
Duration
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Helpful?S sarahlynnnnnn
United States
Words cannot describe how amazing Paula is. Her feedback is all very actionable and she's incredibly thorough. You can tell that she truly cares about her work. This is my first novel, so having her notes as a guide for the revision process is super helpful. I will gladly work with Paula again ! thank you !
$200-$400
Price
2 months
Duration
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Helpful?D drobnick
United States
Paula brings far more to the table than just beta reading—she’s a true creative partner. Her developmental insights and sharp perspective consistently push my writing to a higher level. She doesn’t just spot what’s not working—she helps uncover what could be, always going the extra mile with thoughtful,...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
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6 reviews for this Gig
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D drobnick
United States
Paula did an excellent job beta reading and reviewing my book. She was thorough, thoughtful, and clearly took the time to understand both the story and what I was trying to accomplish. Her feedback included many helpful suggestions for improvement, and she explained them in a way that was easy to understand...
$400-$600
Price
3 months
Duration
P Seller's Response
Helpful?T teddyfarms
Dominica
Paula’s developmental edit was exceptional! Insightful, thorough, and transformative for my novel’s character arcs, structure, and overall cohesion. Her feedback went well beyond her already excellent beta reading, and in the future, I’d choose her developmental editing without hesitation. Highly recommend!
$200-$400
Price
3 months
Duration
P Seller's Response
Helpful?G greg_fiction
United States
Working with Paula is always a wonderful and rewarding experience. Receiving her feedback is like participating in a personal writing workshop or boot camp. She always asks the most consequential questions to help guide the development. She provides the most comprehensive and insightful analysis of what...
$200-$400
Price
3 months
Duration
P Seller's Response
Helpful?S sarahlynnnnnn
United States
Words cannot describe how amazing Paula is. Her feedback is all very actionable and she's incredibly thorough. You can tell that she truly cares about her work. This is my first novel, so having her notes as a guide for the revision process is super helpful. I will gladly work with Paula again ! thank you !
$200-$400
Price
2 months
Duration
P Seller's Response
Helpful?D drobnick
United States
Paula brings far more to the table than just beta reading—she’s a true creative partner. Her developmental insights and sharp perspective consistently push my writing to a higher level. She doesn’t just spot what’s not working—she helps uncover what could be, always going the extra mile with thoughtful,...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
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