I will beta read your story and provide actionable feedback

Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese

Receptionist Attendant

I provide thoughtful, constructive and reader-focused feedback to help authors strengthen their manuscripts. My reports highlight what works, identify points of confusion and offer practical suggestio...
About this Gig

Is your story ready for its next chapter?


I will beta read your manuscript and provide honest, thoughtful, and actionable feedback to help you strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice.


WHAT I WILL ANALYZE


  • Plot, structure, and pacing
  • Character development and motivation
  • Dialogue and character relationships
  • World-building and consistency
  • Reader engagement and emotional impact
  • Plot holes and confusing passages


WHAT YOU WILL RECEIVE


  • A personalized reader report
  • Feedback on strengths and weaknesses
  • Practical suggestions for revision
  • Manuscript comments when included in your package


I welcome short stories, novellas, and novels in the genres listed in my Gig.


PLEASE NOTE


This service does not include proofreading, line editing, or rewriting. For longer manuscripts, please contact me before ordering.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Mystery

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Romance

Language:

English

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Portuguese

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.