I will read your first chapter and give advice on how you can hook your reader

Of all the chapters in your book, the first chapter is the most important. You want your first chapter to hook your reader immediately. I will read the first chapter of your story and create a detailed report with what I think worked, what didn't, and what you can do to hone it into a page-turner.

I absolutely love being able to help writers craft their stories into exactly what they want it to be, so I'm proud that I'm able to review your chapter from the perspective of a publisher, a writer, and a reader. Working as an acquisitions editor for 5 years, I know just what kinds of things publishers are looking for when they review your manuscript for the first time. And having been a writer for 15+ years, I know how to speak your language. I'm right there in the trenches with you. I'm also just an absolute book worm who can relate to your story purely as a reader.