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I will beta read your litrpg or progression fantasy for reader feedback
Romance beta reader delivering reader scores in 7 days,no ghosting, no guesswork
5+ years polishing manuscripts, identifying plot holes, and evaluating pacing for over 150 indie titles. I serve fiction authors, fantasy novelists, and self published indie writers preparing for Amaz...
About this Gig
Finished your LitRPG or progression fantasy manuscript but still wondering, "will readers actually enjoy this?"
A story can have a great progression system, interesting characters, and a strong premise, yet still lose readers because the pacing feels slow, the power progression is confusing, the stakes are weak, or important parts of the story do not land the way you intended.
As a LitRPG beta reader and progression fantasy beta reader, I read your manuscript from a reader's perspective and give honest, practical feedback on what is working and what may need attention.
WHAT I'LL IMPROVE:
- Story and plot flow
- Pacing and chapter engagement
- Character development
- Worldbuilding
- Power progression and progression systems
- Game mechanics and LitRPG elements
- Reader confusion or immersion breaks
- Stakes, tension, and payoff
If you are writing LitRPG, progression fantasy, gamelit, or related fantasy fiction, I want to help you see your story through the eyes of a reader.
MESSAGE ME!!
Genre:
Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you use AI?
No. I use absolutely zero AI. All words, thoughts and comments are completely on my knowledge and expertise always.
My Genre isn't listed, what can I do?
I read most genres, if yours is not included, then message me and ask. I'm happy to read the majority of genres.
Will your feedback be useful if my book is still a first draft?
Yes. Beta reader feedback can help you identify story, pacing, character, worldbuilding, and progression problems before you spend more time polishing the manuscript.
What do you need from me before starting?
Send your manuscript or sample, word count, genre, and anything specific you want extra attention to. If there are particular concerns about your LitRPG or progression fantasy, tell me upfront.
