I will beta read romance beta reader fantasy thriller beta reader alpha reader

United States

I speak English

Manuscript Editor and Beta Reader, Honest, Detailed Feedback

I'm Phillip, a manuscript editor and beta reader who helps authors find what's holding their book back. I read like your future readers and think like an editor, so my feedback is honest, specific, an...
About this Gig

Hello there,

Is your novel ready for real readers, or are there problems you can't see anymore?

As your beta reader, I read your manuscript the way your future readers will, then tell you honestly where it hooks them and where it loses them. I beta read romance, fantasy, thriller,

and YA fiction, and I work as an alpha reader for early drafts.


What I check:

  • Plot holes, pacing problems, and slow chapters
  • Character motivation and believability
  • Where I felt hooked, bored, or confused
  • Tension, worldbuilding, and whether the ending pays off


What you get:

  • A detailed beta reader report
  • Chapter-by-chapter reactions (Standard & Premium)
  • Inline comments in your manuscript (Premium)
  • Clear, specific next steps for revision


I'm an editor by trade, so my feedback goes beyond "I liked it." I find the issues other beta readers and miss and explain why they matter.


Message me with your genre and word count before ordering, and I'll confirm the right package.

Genre:

Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Romance

Language:

English

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French

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