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I will beta read and critique your fiction manuscript
Professional SEO blog posts, copywriting, and fiction beta reading
I'm Phillip, a psychology student and writer with 15+ years of experience in novels, short stories, and articles. I specialize in SEO blog writing, copywriting, and beta reading for fiction. My backgr...
About this Gig
I will beta read your fiction story or manuscript and provide honest, constructive feedback.
As a novelist and short story writer with over 15 years of experience, I know how easy it is to overlook issues in your own work. My goal as your beta reader is to give you clear, actionable feedback that strengthens your story and helps your writing shine.
My feedback will cover:
- Story flow & pacing
- Plot consistency & organization
- Character development & clarity
- Creativity & reader engagement
- Light grammar & sentence structure
- Word usage issues and more
Genres I specialize in:
- Horror
- Psychological
- Thriller
- Suspense
- Mystery
What you'll receive:
- A detailed reader report with suggestions for improvement
- Honest, constructive insights from a writer's perspective
- Free revisions if you're not satisfied - your success is my priority
Custom orders welcome! Whether you have a short story, novella, or full novel, message me to discuss your project.
Let's take your manuscript to the next level together.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is the difference between beta reading and editing?
A beta read focuses on story flow, plot consistency, characters, and reader engagement. It is not a line edit or full proofreading service, though I may point out minor grammar or word usage issues.
Do you accept all genres?
I specialize in horror, psychological thrillers, suspense, and mystery. If you're writing in another genre, feel free to message me, I am open to discussing it.
Can you beta read longer manuscripts than your Premium package?
Yes! Please contact me with your word count, and I'll create a custom offer tailored to your project.
Will I receive in-line edits on my manuscript?
No. My standard service provides a seperate feedback report. For detailed line-level comments, you can request a custom order.
What if I'm not satisfied with your feedback?
Your satisfaction is my priority. I offer revisions to clarify or expand on my notes until you're happy with the service.
How do you deliver feedback?
You'll receive a written report outlining strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions for improvement. This ensures your manuscript remains intact while giving you clear guidance.
Can you give story feedback on a short story or novel?
Absolutely! I beta read both short stories and full-length novels, and I tailor my feedback to your project's length and needs.
Do you provide manuscript critique?
Yes, I provide a detailed critique of your manuscript, covering story flow, plot consistency, pacing, and character development.
Reviews
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P patrick_welsh
United States
His comments are very appreciated
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?I ian_bonner
United States
Phillip did a great job beta reading my novel manuscript. His feedback came in a very detailed, easy to understand format that covers all of the bases and did a great job describing the experience of reading the book. Exactly what I was looking for.
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B babzgray
United Kingdom
Happy with the report I received, would recommend
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?T 
taylorleamey
Repeat Client
United States
I've worked with Phillip several times at this point and there's a reason I keep coming back. He is thorough and pays such attention to detail when reading. Not only that, but his beta report is one of the most robust I've ever seen. Cannot recommend him enough!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?Z 
zack_aj
Repeat Client
Romania
I worked with Philip twice and was extremely impressed by his professionalism, fast delivery, and politeness.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
49 reviews for this Gig
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| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
P patrick_welsh
United States
His comments are very appreciated
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?I ian_bonner
United States
Phillip did a great job beta reading my novel manuscript. His feedback came in a very detailed, easy to understand format that covers all of the bases and did a great job describing the experience of reading the book. Exactly what I was looking for.
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B babzgray
United Kingdom
Happy with the report I received, would recommend
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?T taylorleamey
Repeat Client
United States
I've worked with Phillip several times at this point and there's a reason I keep coming back. He is thorough and pays such attention to detail when reading. Not only that, but his beta report is one of the most robust I've ever seen. Cannot recommend him enough!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?Z zack_aj
Repeat Client
Romania
I worked with Philip twice and was extremely impressed by his professionalism, fast delivery, and politeness.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
