I will developmental and line edit your fiction novel

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

1,300 orders completed

All your editing needs in the palm of your hand

Hi there! I'm a mother of five, a small business owner, and a writer. I hold an MFA in Creative Writing from Southern New Hampshire University and have been editing for nearly a decade. If you have an...
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About this Gig

Vetted Pro

Hi! I'm Maryssa Gammon of Pocket Editing, an MFA-trained editor with 10 years of experience. I specialize in Fantasy, Sci-Fi, YA, and Romance, helping authors strengthen structure, pacing, and prose while preserving their voice.


What You'll Receive

Depending on your selected package, your edit may include:

  • Tracked changes file showing every correction
  • Clean copy with corrections applied
  • Developmental commentary
  • Resource guide


What I Offer

  • Proofreading (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
  • Copy & Line Editing (clarity, readability, flow; I do not provide stylistic rewrites)
  • Developmental Feedback (structure, pacing, and characters)


What I Don't

  • Full rewrites/ghostwriting
  • Memoirs or nonfiction developmental editing
  • Violent sexual content without prior discussion
  • Any violent sexual content involving minors


A Note:

Editing is collaborative. I correct, clarify, and guide. You apply the feedback and make it shine! While no editor can guarantee a file will be 100% error-free, I will get as close as humanly possible.


Send me a message with your word count, genre, and timeline, and I'll help you choose the right package for your project!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

696 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(671)
(24)
(1)
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(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    ellie_d13

    US

    United States

    4.3

    I loved working with Maryssa. She was very polite, patient, and flexible, and she delivered her edits on time (actually, earlier than we agreed on, which I appreciated). I was really thankful that she addressed the specific concerns I listed - she gave many notes on each concern I had. I would definitely consider working with her again.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    neva_p

    US

    United States

    5

    It was a pleasure working with Maryssa. The development edit report she created was extremely helpful for progressing my novel, very thorough, and exceeded my expectations. In addition, she went above and beyond by also providing a resource guide which is helpful now and will be useful in the future.

    $400-$600

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • H

    harris_chara

    AU

    Australia

    5

    This was incredibly insightful feedback! The notes document I received repeatedly prompted me to consider new perspectives that I had previously not considered! After one read through of the notes, I am confident I'm going to revisit my draft with a new attention to detail! I am excited!

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    tcummings25

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa was professional. She kept me updated on her progress and completed her review earlier than expected. She provided useful feedback for how to improve my manuscript.

    Up to $50

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    karim_saleh04

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Her attention to detail and her ability to improve the flow and structure of the story made a meaningful difference in shaping it into what it is now. Her feedback helped refine not only the writing, but also the overall pacing and readability of the book. I truly appreciate the time and care she put into helping bring this story to life.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

696 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(671)
(24)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • E
    image-docs

    ellie_d13

    US

    United States

    4.3

    I loved working with Maryssa. She was very polite, patient, and flexible, and she delivered her edits on time (actually, earlier than we agreed on, which I appreciated). I was really thankful that she addressed the specific concerns I listed - she gave many notes on each concern I had. I would definitely consider working with her again.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N

    neva_p

    US

    United States

    5

    It was a pleasure working with Maryssa. The development edit report she created was extremely helpful for progressing my novel, very thorough, and exceeded my expectations. In addition, she went above and beyond by also providing a resource guide which is helpful now and will be useful in the future.

    $400-$600

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • H

    harris_chara

    AU

    Australia

    5

    This was incredibly insightful feedback! The notes document I received repeatedly prompted me to consider new perspectives that I had previously not considered! After one read through of the notes, I am confident I'm going to revisit my draft with a new attention to detail! I am excited!

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    tcummings25

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa was professional. She kept me updated on her progress and completed her review earlier than expected. She provided useful feedback for how to improve my manuscript.

    Up to $50

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    karim_saleh04

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Her attention to detail and her ability to improve the flow and structure of the story made a meaningful difference in shaping it into what it is now. Her feedback helped refine not only the writing, but also the overall pacing and readability of the book. I truly appreciate the time and care she put into helping bring this story to life.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No