I will developmental and line edit your fiction novel

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

1,300 orders completed

All your editing needs in the palm of your hand

Hi there! I'm a mother of five, a small business owner, and a writer. I hold an MFA in Creative Writing from Southern New Hampshire University and have been editing for nearly a decade. If you have an...
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  • Book Editing

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About this Gig

Vetted Pro

Hi! I'm Maryssa Gammon of Pocket Editing, an MFA-trained editor with 10 years of experience. I specialize in Fantasy, Sci-Fi, YA, and Romance, helping authors strengthen structure, pacing, and prose while preserving their voice.


What You'll Receive

Depending on your selected package, your edit may include:

  • Tracked changes file showing every correction
  • Clean copy with corrections applied
  • Developmental commentary
  • Resource guide


What I Offer

  • Proofreading (grammar, punctuation, consistency)
  • Copy & Line Editing (clarity, readability, flow; I do not provide stylistic rewrites)
  • Developmental Feedback (structure, pacing, and characters)


What I Don't

  • Full rewrites/ghostwriting
  • Memoirs or nonfiction developmental editing
  • Violent sexual content without prior discussion
  • Any violent sexual content involving minors


A Note:

Editing is collaborative. I correct, clarify, and guide. You apply the feedback and make it shine! While no editor can guarantee a file will be 100% error-free, I will get as close as humanly possible.


Send me a message with your word count, genre, and timeline, and I'll help you choose the right package for your project!

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

724 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(697)
(26)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    andreeadianai

    RO

    Romania

    5

    Maryssa is an angel. My project is messy and complicated and she did sooo MUCH for it, she was so patient and took into consideration all of my requests and concerns about it. I got the hybrid package and everything is so comprehensive and the feedback goes into so much details is amazing. Also, she...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    markyleo

    US

    United States

    5

    I've worked with a lot of people online, and honestly, Fiverr can feel overwhelming because there are hundreds of editors to choose from. Everyone looks qualified on paper, but it's rare to find someone who is both highly skilled and genuinely cares about your project. Maryssa was that person for me. From...

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    ellie_d13

    US

    United States

    4.3

    I loved working with Maryssa. She was very polite, patient, and flexible, and she delivered her edits on time (actually, earlier than we agreed on, which I appreciated). I was really thankful that she addressed the specific concerns I listed - she gave many notes on each concern I had. I would definitely consider working with her again.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jenknowsprose

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa delivered an incredibly comprehensive report organized into understandable sections such as characters, world building, and romance. This facilitated maximum understanding of the feedback and, when paired with the annotated copy of my MS, will make revisions a breeze. Constructive feedback...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cht2020

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa is an exceptional editor who has great attention to detail. Already with the suggestions Maryssa made, the work reads cleaner and more succinct, (which I've always struggled with.) I would recommend Maryssa to anyone looking for an editor who will help your book become what it's supposed to be, while keeping your voice intact.

    $400-$600

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

724 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(697)
(26)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    andreeadianai

    RO

    Romania

    5

    Maryssa is an angel. My project is messy and complicated and she did sooo MUCH for it, she was so patient and took into consideration all of my requests and concerns about it. I got the hybrid package and everything is so comprehensive and the feedback goes into so much details is amazing. Also, she...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    markyleo

    US

    United States

    5

    I've worked with a lot of people online, and honestly, Fiverr can feel overwhelming because there are hundreds of editors to choose from. Everyone looks qualified on paper, but it's rare to find someone who is both highly skilled and genuinely cares about your project. Maryssa was that person for me. From...

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    ellie_d13

    US

    United States

    4.3

    I loved working with Maryssa. She was very polite, patient, and flexible, and she delivered her edits on time (actually, earlier than we agreed on, which I appreciated). I was really thankful that she addressed the specific concerns I listed - she gave many notes on each concern I had. I would definitely consider working with her again.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jenknowsprose

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa delivered an incredibly comprehensive report organized into understandable sections such as characters, world building, and romance. This facilitated maximum understanding of the feedback and, when paired with the annotated copy of my MS, will make revisions a breeze. Constructive feedback...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cht2020

    US

    United States

    5

    Maryssa is an exceptional editor who has great attention to detail. Already with the suggestions Maryssa made, the work reads cleaner and more succinct, (which I've always struggled with.) I would recommend Maryssa to anyone looking for an editor who will help your book become what it's supposed to be, while keeping your voice intact.

    $400-$600

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No