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I will developmental edit your fantasy, romantasy litrpg novel
Experienced Writer and Book Editor
Hi, I’m Preston Ellery, a professional writer, editor, and grant writing expert with 20+ years of experience helping clients communicate their ideas clearly and effectively.
My academic background in...
About this Gig
Your Story World Has Potential. Let's Make Readers Want to Stay in It.
You've spent months building worlds, shaping characters, creating magic systems, and bringing your story to life. But you may still wonder: Does the plot flow? Are the characters believable? Is the world immersive without slowing the story down? Does the romance feel earned?
A strong idea deserves more than surface-level corrections. It needs developmental editing that examines the big picture and strengthens the readers experience.
I will provide a detailed developmental edit for your Fantasy, Romantasy, or LitRPG novel, focusing on:
- Plot structure and pacing
- Character arcs and motivation
- Worldbuilding, lore, and consistency
- Magic systems and story logic
- Romance and emotional development
- LitRPG progression and game mechanics
- Stakes, conflict, and tension
- Point of view and narrative flow
- Plot holes and unresolved threads
- Scene and chapter purpose
You'll receive clear, constructive feedback that respects your voice and vision while helping your manuscript become stronger, clearer, and more engaging.
Your story has potential. Lets take it to the next level.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
1. What is included in a developmental edit?
I evaluate the big-picture elements of your manuscript, including plot, pacing, character development, worldbuilding, story structure, conflict, stakes, point of view, and overall reader experience. You’ll receive clear, actionable feedback to guide your revision.
2. Will you rewrite or change my story?
No. I will not rewrite your novel or replace your creative voice. My role is to identify what is working, highlight areas that may need attention, and provide suggestions that help you strengthen your story while keeping your vision intact
3. Can you help if I know something is wrong but don’t know how to fix it?
Yes. Many writers can feel that a story is slow, confusing, or missing emotional impact without knowing the cause. I’ll identify possible issues and provide practical recommendations to help you approach the revision with clarity.
4. Is this the same as proofreading or copyediting?
No. Developmental editing focuses on the story as a whole, not primarily on grammar, spelling, punctuation, or sentence-level corrections. If you need proofreading or copyediting, please contact me before ordering.
5. Can you edit an unfinished manuscript or only a completed novel?
Both are welcome. I can review a completed manuscript, a partial draft, opening chapters, or a specific section. Please select the package that matches your word count.
6. Can you identify plot holes or pacing problems?
Yes. I’ll look for plot inconsistencies, unclear motivations, unresolved threads, weak story logic, slow sections, rushed events, and scenes that may not contribute enough to the story.
7. Can you review the romance in my Romantasy novel?
Yes. I can evaluate romantic chemistry, emotional development, relationship pacing, character motivation, conflict, and whether the relationship feels natural and earned.
