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I will be your developmental editor and provide a thorough manuscript critique
Architecting Immersive Fiction: Elite Ghostwriting and Editorial Excellence
I transform ambitious concepts into exceptional works of fiction. In particular, I offer Fantasy and Sci-Fi authors a comprehensive literary service that includes Professional Ghostwriting, precise Ed...
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Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
STRUCTURAL STORY I FIX:
- Sagging middle acts, plot holes, and narrative dead ends.
- Flat character arcs, unclear motivations, and weak character dynamics.
- Slow pacing, lack of tension, and inconsistent word building.
- Story confusion that causes readers to give up before ending.
I provide human-only developmental editing and manuscript critiques to strengthen your novel's core structure before you move to line editing or proofreading.
WHAT I EVALUATE:
- Plot & structure: Resolving plot holes, chapter flows, and story logic.
- Character Arcs: Building distinct motivations, emotional stakes, and voices.
- Pacing & Tension: Fixing narrative drag and maintaining reader momentum.
- Worldbuilding: Enhancing setting immersion and internal consistency.
WHAT YOU RECEIVE:
- MS word manuscript annotations (inline notes, reactions and scene feedback).
- Detailed editorial report (chapter by chapter breakdown of strengths and structural fixes).
Note: This services focuses strictly on story craft and structure. It does not include line editing, copy editing or proofreading.
Ready to strengthen your story? Select your package to order directly, or message me your genrre and word count.
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FAQ
Is my manuscript safe with you? Will you share my ideas?
100% safe. As a professional editor, I deeply respect your intellectual property and the hard work you put into this book. I will never share, distribute, or use your work. You retain all copyrights, always.
I am nervous to share my work. Is your feedback going to be harsh?
My goal is to elevate your book, not tear you down! I provide "tough but loving" feedback. I will be honest about what isn't working (plot holes, pacing issues), but I will also cheer you on where your writing shines and offer constructive solutions to fix the weak spots.
My novel is 85,000 words, but your packages say 50,000 words. How do I order?
Please send me a message! Tell me your exact word count and genre, and I will create a Custom Offer with an accurate price and delivery time for your full manuscript.
Will you fix my spelling and grammar during this edit?
No, this is strictly a Developmental Edit. We are focusing on the "big picture" (plot, characters, structure, pacing). If we fix grammar now, you might end up deleting those corrected sentences anyway! If you need proofreading later, check out my other gigs or message me.
What genres do you specialize in, and are there any you do NOT edit?
I specialize in most fiction genres (Romance, Thriller, Sci-Fi, Fantasy, YA, Contemporary). I do NOT currently edit poetry, academic textbooks, or highly technical non-fiction. If you aren't sure if we are a good fit, message me a 1,000-word sample!
